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If this card is the only Zombie-Type Monster in your hand Special Summon it. If this card is Special Summoned it cannot be set into Defense Position. Once per turn, you can discard one card from your hand to destroy one card on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, as a result in battle, remove from play 2 monsters from your deck.

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OCG Fix:

 

If this card is the only Zombie-Type monster in your hand, Special Summon it. If this card is Special Summoned, it cannot be Set. Once per turn, you can discard one card to destroy one card on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result in battle, remove from play 2 monsters from your deck.

 

The pic is alright, but not brilliant. 8/10

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Its a good card well balanced, I like it. Here's some help with the OCG:

 

"If this card is the only Zombie-Type Monster in your hand, you can Special Summon it in Attack Position. This card must remain in Attack Position as long as it remains face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can discard one card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy one card on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result in battle, remove 2 monsters from your deck from play."

 

7.5/10

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Its a good card well balanced' date=' I like it. Here's some help with the OCG:

 

"If this card is the only Zombie-Type Monster in your hand, you can Special Summon it in Attack Position. This card must remain in Attack Position as long as it remains face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can discard one card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy one card on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result in battle, remove 2 monsters from your deck from play."

 

7.5/10

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This OCG fix is wrong. The actual card doesn't say "Special Summon in Attack..." and the bit after that. What you've done is reworked the effect of someones card.

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Its a good card well balanced' date=' I like it. Here's some help with the OCG:

 

"If this card is the only Zombie-Type Monster in your hand, you can Special Summon it in Attack Position. This card must remain in Attack Position as long as it remains face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can discard one card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy one card on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result in battle, remove 2 monsters from your deck from play."

 

7.5/10

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This OCG fix is wrong. The actual card doesn't say "Special Summon in Attack..." and the bit after that. What you've done is reworked the effect of someones card.

 

His original version was worded wrong. The jist of what he wanted to get accross was that you can special suummon it in attack mode and it cant be switched to defence position, so I worded that better for him. The second half of the effect wasn't too bad but I had to change a few commas and things round, trust me though I know what I'm talking about. What do you mean by "reworked the effect"

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