Chigsweef's New Spell Card ^_^ Please Rate.

[Skirts]

I don't know if it's op'd, or under powered. Any ideas to fix it would be much appreciated, credit will be applied where appropriate if you fix it. OCG and grammar error fixes are appreciated if you can see any. Thank you ! ^_^

 

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Lore: Activate only by discarding 1 card from your hand when your opponent declares an attack while your Life Points are lower than theirs. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the destroyed monster's ATK.[/align]

[caner5000]

I say its fine.

[Skirts]

I say its fine.

 

Thanks ! ^_^

[Sai Pyke]

The picture is sweet, and I think the OCG is good. The effect is pretty cool, it may be OP'ed, but I don't think it is. 9/10

[Skirts]

The picture is sweet' date=' and I think the OCG is good. The effect is pretty cool, it may be OP'ed, but I don't think it is. 9/10

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Thanks Sai Pyke. (:

[OmegaWave]

[align=center]MISS ME?! Guess not.....*cry*

 

Omega's Famous Rants

 

(OCG Fix)

Activate only by discarding 1 card from your hand when your opponent declares an attack while your Life Points are lower than theirs. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the destroyed monster's ATK.

 

(Ratings)

Picture: 0/2

OCG: 1.5/2

Balance: 1/2

Uniqueness: 1/2

 

Total: 3.5/8 = C

 

(Rants)

Not a bad shot this time.

 

There is so much sheet going on in that picture, it almost gave me a seizure. The picture doesn't match the name of the card AT ALL.

 

Your OCG was good, some words were placed wrong but it was all good mostly.

 

As for balance, it's a cheap game-turner card that anyone could easily use since it's Activation Requirements are almost always meetable.

 

As far as Uniqueness is concerned, the effect doesn't strike me as very unique, it's generic destruction. But seeing a Single Spell card at all on YCM these days is pretty rare.

 

(Suggestions)

I suggest changing this to a Trap Card since it's effect is more Trap-like. I also think you change "Destroy the attacking monster" to "Negate the attack" just to make it a little less cheap.

 

And that's the bottomline, because the jabroni said so![/align]

[Card Board Box]

This is a pretty good card although the picture is over-used.

Fixed the first sentence:

"Activate only when your opponent declares an attack and your Life Points are lower than your opponents."

(Look at "A Hero Emerges" Trap Card)

 

The OCG is just fine really, only a few mistakes.

 

8.4/10

[Skirts]

Thanks guys ! I will see what I can do. (:

[RickiMinaj]

ohhh my, that picture... what a waste. It could have been a great finale monster or a nice ritual spell. But it goes unto this. Darling, you must learn that crowded pictures make for a pretty annoying card. Sorry, but that's the truth. I'm not a grammar whore, and I don't much care for it, because i know you got your point across clear and stated. This card would be semi-limited. Two because it's not as strong as magic cylinder, but it can do almost the exact same damage. Destroying a monster and then dealing a good 1000 - 1500 points of damage. That's a lot of clean up. Though after one activation of this card, your life points should be almost matched or at par with your opponents.

[Skirts]

Card as been updated courtesy of OmegaWave. (:

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ohhh my' date=' that picture... what a waste. It could have been a great finale monster or a nice ritual spell. But it goes unto this. Darling, you must learn that crowded pictures make for a pretty annoying card. Sorry, but that's the truth. I'm not a grammar whore, and I don't much care for it, because i know you got your point across clear and stated. This card would be semi-limited. Two because it's not as strong as magic cylinder, but it can do almost the exact same damage. Destroying a monster and then dealing a good 1000 - 1500 points of damage. That's a lot of clean up. Though after one activation of this card, your life points should be almost matched or at par with your opponents.

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Thank you Essence for the insight ! (:

I appreciate you and OmegaWave's help. I will see what I can do about posting a new one in a bit. I should better think this idea. My main idea behind this card was to even out the score. oO