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[shelds9]

Here is my newst card. Plz rate.

 

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

Whoa thats really powerful, i saw you were trying to balance it but i think its still a little op

[·Toot]

However it is hard to summon it' date=' it still is overpowered

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[Card Board Box]

~ "graveyard" should be "Graveyard"

 

I agree with HarpyLadyFan, this is seriously powerful even though you tryed to balance it out.

 

The OCG is great, Picture is great, alittle OP'ed.

 

9.4

[Skirts]

A bit op'd. Tone it down. Good picture though. 7/10

[duelistxynam]

This card is VERY unrealistic, in all honesty.

 

1.) To start with, you'd have to throw this card into a naturally Swarming deck just to play it (assuming, naturally, you can get 5 swarmable monsters before you're beat).

 

2.) Special Summon from where? Graveyard? Removed from play? Because it can't be from the hand.

 

3.) Rolling a D12...pushing it a little. OCG errors (not "double-digit" or "single-digit", but "10-12" and "1-9") and ability mimicing (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ocean_Dragon_Lord_-_Neo-Daedalus) removes crediblity AND originality.

 

4.) Effect wise, there is no reason for this card to exist. It helps no one, cripples the hell out of you, AND means the field and both hands are destroyed should someone actually play with a balanced deck and have "bottomless traphole" ready upon summoning.

 

Picture is amazing.

 

Keep the picture, lose this effect, make a new balanced usable one, repost.

 

4/10.