Skirts Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I don't know if this is op'd or not. I could see how it might be able to be abused in an insect deck. It's just a rough card right now, so please any ideas and help on how to make it better would be appreciated. Credit is applied where appropriate. OCG and grammar fixes are appreciated ! (: [align=center] Lore: "1 Tuner + 1 or more non Insect-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned place it in your Spell and Trap card zone and treat it as a Spell card. During each of your opponents Standby Phases, inflict 700 points of damage to your opponents Life Points. This card's attack is equal to the amount of damage inflicted by this card's effect (max 2800). On the 4th turn place this card in your Monster zone. When this card is destroyed by an opponents card effect, discard your hand to the Graveyard."[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarpieLadyFan2496 Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I can see that you tried to even it out with that last effect...hmm but its still a little bit op7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 a question, is this monster considered a spell/trap when synchro summoned? or a monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I can see that you tried to even it out with that last effect...hmm but its still a little bit op7/10 I was gunna add in the effect something along the lines of "After this card if placed in your Monster card zone' date=' increase your opponents Life Points by 1400."[/i']. That's to half-compensate for the 2800 they loss. ^_^My whole goal behind this card was to give a leach effect.a question' date=' is this monster considered a spell/trap when synchro summoned? or a monster?[/quote'] Spell & Trap card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I like the effect, it's very creative. I agree that it is a tad OP. Maybe lower the damage dealt or how many turns that it stays on the field, IDK. But overall, I like the effect, picture and name. There hasn't been an insect monster for a while. But some OCG errors. 8.9/10 for you. Keep up the good work :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I like the effect' date=' it's very creative. I agree that it is a tad OP. Maybe lower the damage dealt or how many turns that it stays on the field, IDK. But overall, I like the effect, picture and name. There hasn't been an insect monster for a while. But some OCG errors. 8.9/10 for you. Keep up the good work :).[/quote'] Thank you -Athena- ! ^_^ I have a bug phobia, and I thought what the heck. Oh well. It was a try. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 its pretty much perfectly balanced, 8.5/10 ocg: discard you hand to the graveyard. just discard your hand is enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 its pretty much perfectly balanced' date=' 8.5/10 ocg: discard you hand to the graveyard. just discard your hand is enough[/quote'] Thanks Galadrien. I see you follow my cards .. Are you fan ? ; D Just kidding. (: I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 "1 Tuner + 1 or more non Insect-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned place it in your Spell and Trap card zone. (when it is placed in there, is it a monster, or is it a spell/trap card?)During each of your opponents Standby Phases, inflict 700 points of damage to your opponents Life Points(So does this effect continue when it becomes a monster, or only in the S/T zone?). This card's attack is equal to the amount of damage inflicted (damage inflicted? hmmm... so it can be any damage inflicted, or damage inflicted only by this card?) (max 2800). On the 4th turn place this card in your Monster zone. When this card is destroyed by an opponents card effect, discard your hand to the Graveyard and remove this card from play (to be honest, this card is pretty balanced. You don't really need the last effect. I mean, with all the S/T destruction we have, is it really necessary?)." Well, that's really all I have to say for this one. This card lacked specifications to each effect. When you're not specific, it becomes meta, because it can be abused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 "1 Tuner + 1 or more non Insect-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned place it in your Spell and Trap card zone. (when it is placed in there' date=' is it a monster, or is it a spell/trap card?)[/b']During each of your opponents Standby Phases, inflict 700 points of damage to your opponents Life Points(So does this effect continue when it becomes a monster, or only in the S/T zone?). This card's attack is equal to the amount of damage inflicted (damage inflicted? hmmm... so it can be any damage inflicted, or damage inflicted only by this card?) (max 2800). On the 4th turn place this card in your Monster zone. When this card is destroyed by an opponents card effect, discard your hand to the Graveyard and remove this card from play (to be honest, this card is pretty balanced. You don't really need the last effect. I mean, with all the S/T destruction we have, is it really necessary?)." Well, that's really all I have to say for this one. This card lacked specifications to each effect. When you're not specific, it becomes meta, because it can be abused. Thanks Essence ! ^_^ You make a good point. I will fix up the lore. (:Card has been updated with proper OCG and specifications courtesy of Essence, and Galadrien. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Original card is original for sure. Picture is amazing, seriously. I actually don't like/use Synchro cards, but I would absolutely use this card. Great man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Original card is original for sure. Picture is amazing' date=' seriously. I actually don't like/use Synchro cards, but I would absolutely use this card. Great man.[/quote'] Sweet thanks Zeaux ! A rating coming from you like that means its got to be good ! xDThanks dude ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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