What do you all think about these?

[Grifith]

What do you all think about these cards? Need opinions / rates.

 

 

 

 

LORE::

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned if your opponent has 3 more monsters on their side of the field than you do. If this card is Special Summoned using this effect, place 1 Mantis Counter onto this card(max.1). You can remove 1 Mantis Counter from this card to destroy 1 Defense-Position monster your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

 

 

What do you think? --------

[caner5000]

I think you can remove "using this effect" on the first one since you put "can only be special summoned". The second one i think is kinda op'ed. Love them though 10/10

[Sai Pyke]

The OCG is good, and the picture is cool. The effect(s) over all are a bit OP'ed in my opinion, so I'm gonna give you a 7/10.

[Skirts]

OP'd card is OP'd. Picture is good, and OCG is fine. 7/10

[Grifith]

It's Op'd cuz it's Ultimate Mantis. Ultimate means pure n00b cards that are supposed to be Op'd like BEUD. or dragon master knight or some other very good examples.

[Skirts]

It's Op'd cuz it's Ultimate Mantis. Ultimate means pure n00b cards that are supposed to be Op'd like BEUD. or dragon master knight or some other very good examples.

 

Don't get mad because we're telling you what needs to be fixed. It's Op'd. Deal with it, or fix it. Those are your two options.

[Grifith]

OK, I guess you don't know that... I WANTED IT OP.

[Skirts]

OK' date=' I guess you don't know that... I WANTED IT OP.

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I guess you don't know that op'd cards are frowned upon in the Realistic Section. Read the description of the Realistic Card section.

 

[RickiMinaj]

OK' date=' I guess you don't know that... I WANTED IT OP.

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This is quite the missay right here. Do you really?

 

Anyway, on to the card. Everything in the card is fine. There are no errors of which i see. The only thing that bothers me here is the high amount of ATK and DEF you have given it. Maybe reduce the ATK to 2000. That would seem more fair. Even 2500 ATK isn't bad at all either.

[Chigs_Teru]

Hey, what's all the fighting going on about here? Grifith, you need to stop all that nonsense with Chigsweef, i may be a 1 Star Member, but ido know how to resolve a fight.

[touzaikokon]

First, a cleanup on your effect grammar:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if your opponent controls 3 more monsters than you control. When this card is Special Summoned this way, place 1 Mantis Counter on it (max. 1). You can remove 1 Mantis Counter from this card to destroy 1 Defense Position your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

 

Well, it's an 8-star Semi-NOMI that gets to bomb cards the first time it hits the field. And it has 3000/3150 stats, effectively pushing the limit on the Rule of 3000. It's not super-creative, and pushing the limit on OP'd already. But let's continue.

 

You can only use it if you're outnumbered 3 to 0, 4 to 1, or 5 to 2, so this card is really only useful post-swarm, unless you have a deck that slaps Tokens on the other side of the field. Unfortunately, by the time your opponent has 3 more monsters than you, they're probably pushing for game. You should speed up the Summon to 2 more monsters, or 3 more cards, or something.

 

As for the burn effect, it doesn't make much sense. I guess it's motivation for a player to run it over instead of destroying it via effect, although that's only going to be a big deterrent late-game. Of course, that's when you'd play this card, but I think either way, 1000 points of burn is a bit much.