bigwig Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 I'm making a new card set where Removing cards from play is a good thing. Here are the first monsters I've made. Please rate and comment HONESTLY. Help with OCG too. Enjoy! If the pics don't work tell me and I'll upload them again. Monsters Spells Traps Hope you've enjoyed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sai Pyke Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 First things first, always put a space between the monsters needed to Synchro summon the monster, and the actual effect. The OCG seems a bit off on some of them, but I'm not an expert on OCG, so I'll let others give the fixes. Picture are cool, and the ideas are cool. 7/10. Keep making cards my friend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Thanks! I'm gonna make some spells and traps so the opponent takes damage for every monster removed from play :). That's just a starting idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sai Pyke Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Thanks! I'm gonna make some spells and traps so the opponent takes damage for every monster removed from play :). That's just a starting idea. Sounds good! I'll rate 'em when I see 'em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 pretty good nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Thank you for your comments! I'm gonna keep on making them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 I like it. Pictures are good, except I noticed The Lich King from WoW: WoTlK. OCG is a bit off. Good job ! 8/10 Dude ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 I like it. Pictures are good' date=' except I noticed The Lich King from WoW: WoTlK. OCG is a bit off. Good job ! 8/10 Dude ![/quote'] lol that so giggity,but yea the cards are good keep up the work so I won't be bored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Ok, thanks! I'll try to find a good picture to change the Lich King with. Please keep commenting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robkill13 Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 firstly, good pics. secondly, all of the synchro's are under powered except for the water wizard, but since the living chaos tuner has a djin effect, they become awesome, and so you get another 1up for the tuner, but no points for synchro's themselves. the ghost knight shouldn't be a spirit if you can special summon it so easily, and it's great because of that, a little overpowered but hey look at faultroll. the undead guard need's work and the crusader is under powered as well, ever hear of stratos? but overall ill give you a 6/10 for a great base, and because your 2 first rituals are awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Thanks! I'm going to add a few spells later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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.:Sasuke Uchiha:. Posted July 25, 2010 Report Share Posted July 25, 2010 good not op Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2010 Thanks! I'm making some more spells right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2010 bumpadded new traps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2010 Added Decision of the Afterlife and changed Revenge of Chaos and Castle of Black Mirage's pictures. bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Board Box Posted July 25, 2010 Report Share Posted July 25, 2010 ~ "Remove from play" should be "remove from play" (applys with "removed from play" too)~ "level" should be "Level"~ "Field" should be "field"~ "face up" should be "face-up"~ "Battle" should be "battle" Your OCG is good and I like the pictures. I also like what you did with "Living Chaos Royal Guard", the effect would go great with my deck. :3 8.3 PS. Goldfish :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2010 Thanks for the OCG help. Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2010 All my cards are currently gone, I'm waiting for YCM to return them so I can edit. 'YA HEAR THAT CARD GODS, I'M WAITING!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2010 Bump Keep posting comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted July 29, 2010 Report Share Posted July 29, 2010 "Chaos Control" is Shadow the Hedgehog's move! I give a 7.5/10. I like the concept, and there are only minor OCG errors that I saw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Thanks! I'm working on the OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DYLANTHETORMENTOR Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 for living chaos prince donnan what do you mean by remove from play pile its just removed from play monster not take a monster from your remove from play pile Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigwig Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Your remove from play pile is like your graveyard. When your cards are removed from play they go in a pile right of the graveyard. This is the remove from play pile. I'm going to change that term though. Thanks for your comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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