The Butterfly Archtype 12/40 UPDATED PLZ RATE

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Skirts]

See, you did a good job executing the idea. I only saw a few grammatical and OCG errors. 7/10. Good job ! (:

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

See' date=' you did a good job executing the idea. I only saw a few grammatical and OCG errors. 7/10. Good job ! (:

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Thnx u :)

[Skirts]

See' date=' you did a good job executing the idea. I only saw a few grammatical and OCG errors. 7/10. Good job ! (:

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Thnx u :)

 

No problem. (: Good luck if you are going to pursue this set !

[Jace Beleren]

the pictures are okay

there z a few OCG errors

7/10 keep it up buddy

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

the pictures are okay

there z a few OCG errors

7/10 keep it up buddy

 

Thank you :)

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

bump

[Skirts]

Hello HarpieLadyFan2496 again ! (:

First of all, I like the newcards. I can spot a few OCG/ grammatical error's in the card. I'll fix each one for you here. (Remember, I'm not a pro at OCG, but here's my shot at it. xD)

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Garden:[/b]]

"When a card with "Butterfly" in its name is attacked, draw 1 cad. If the card you drew is a monster, Special Summon it to the field. Your opponents attack is directed the Special Summoned monster instead. If the card is a Spell or Trap card, send it to the Graveyard."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Summoner:[/b]]

"When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 monster with "Butterfly" in its name from your hand to the field."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Neon Butterfly:[/b]]

"FLIP: Flip all face-down monsters on your opponents side of the field. Negate any Flip effects that are activated."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Golden Light:[/b]]

"This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Butterfly" in its name. The monster equipped with this card can attack your Life Points directly. During your End Phase destroy the equipped monster and this card."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Mystic Energy:[/b]]

"A monster equipped with this card is not effected by Spell cards"

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Fragile Butterfly:[/b]]

"When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 200 for every card in your hand."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Magical Glow:[/b]]

-This one I am not quite sure.-

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Light of Purity:[/b]]

"When a monster you control with the word "Butterfly" in its name is sent to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 500."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Dragon:[/b]]

"For every card with "Butterfly" in it's name on either player's side of the field, increase this card's attack by 100"

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Girl:[/b]]

-Seems fine to me-

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Queen:[/b]]

"During your Standby Phase, Special Summon one "Forest Sprite" Token [EARTH/ Fairy/ ATK, 0/ DEF, 100]. For each "Forest Sprite" Token on the field, increase this card's attack by 100. You can Tribute 4 "Forest Sprite" Tokens to destroy every monster on the field, except this card."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Magic:[/b]]

-Seems fine to me-

 

[Alwi Verdinan]

OMG,Butterfly Dragon !?

i love it! XD

Nice art,bad effect.

Light of Purity=error

i like your card signature

good job. XD

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

Hello HarpieLadyFan2496 again ! (:

First of all' date=' I like the newcards. I can spot a few OCG/ grammatical error's in the card. I'll fix each one for you here. [b'](Remember, I'm not a pro at OCG, but here's my shot at it. xD)[/b]

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Garden:[/b]]

"When a card with "Butterfly" in its name is attacked, draw 1 cad. If the card you drew is a monster, Special Summon it to the field. Your opponents attack is directed the Special Summoned monster instead. If the card is a Spell or Trap card, send it to the Graveyard."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Summoner:[/b]]

"When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 monster with "Butterfly" in its name from your hand to the field."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Neon Butterfly:[/b]]

"FLIP: Flip all face-down monsters on your opponents side of the field. Negate any Flip effects that are activated."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Golden Light:[/b]]

"This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Butterfly" in its name. The monster equipped with this card can attack your Life Points directly. During your End Phase destroy the equipped monster and this card."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Mystic Energy:[/b]]

"A monster equipped with this card is not effected by Spell cards"

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Fragile Butterfly:[/b]]

"When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 200 for every card in your hand."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Magical Glow:[/b]]

-This one I am not quite sure.-

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Light of Purity:[/b]]

"When a monster you control with the word "Butterfly" in its name is sent to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 500."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Dragon:[/b]]

"For every card with "Butterfly" in it's name on either player's side of the field, increase this card's attack by 100"

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Girl:[/b]]

-Seems fine to me-

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Queen:[/b]]

"During your Standby Phase, Special Summon one "Forest Sprite" Token [EARTH/ Fairy/ ATK, 0/ DEF, 100]. For each "Forest Sprite" Token on the field, increase this card's attack by 100. You can Tribute 4 "Forest Sprite" Tokens to destroy every monster on the field, except this card."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Magic:[/b]]

-Seems fine to me-

 

 

wow thnx!

[Skirts]

Hello HarpieLadyFan2496 again ! (:

First of all' date=' I like the newcards. I can spot a few OCG/ grammatical error's in the card. I'll fix each one for you here. [b'](Remember, I'm not a pro at OCG, but here's my shot at it. xD)[/b]

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Garden:[/b]]

"When a card with "Butterfly" in its name is attacked, draw 1 cad. If the card you drew is a monster, Special Summon it to the field. Your opponents attack is directed the Special Summoned monster instead. If the card is a Spell or Trap card, send it to the Graveyard."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Summoner:[/b]]

"When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 monster with "Butterfly" in its name from your hand to the field."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Neon Butterfly:[/b]]

"FLIP: Flip all face-down monsters on your opponents side of the field. Negate any Flip effects that are activated."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Golden Light:[/b]]

"This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Butterfly" in its name. The monster equipped with this card can attack your Life Points directly. During your End Phase destroy the equipped monster and this card."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Mystic Energy:[/b]]

"A monster equipped with this card is not effected by Spell cards"

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Fragile Butterfly:[/b]]

"When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 200 for every card in your hand."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Magical Glow:[/b]]

-This one I am not quite sure.-

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Light of Purity:[/b]]

"When a monster you control with the word "Butterfly" in its name is sent to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 500."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Dragon:[/b]]

"For every card with "Butterfly" in it's name on either player's side of the field, increase this card's attack by 100"

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Girl:[/b]]

-Seems fine to me-

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Queen:[/b]]

"During your Standby Phase, Special Summon one "Forest Sprite" Token [EARTH/ Fairy/ ATK, 0/ DEF, 100]. For each "Forest Sprite" Token on the field, increase this card's attack by 100. You can Tribute 4 "Forest Sprite" Tokens to destroy every monster on the field, except this card."

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Butterfly Magic:[/b]]

-Seems fine to me-

 

 

wow thnx!

 

No problem ! Just redo the cards, and repost them in this thread ! (: