New! Fire Fairy! please rate

[HarpieLadyFan2496]

[Skirts]

Nice new card ! (:

Could use some work on the OCG and grammar, but I posted the fixes on your other thread.

7/10 ! (:

[OmegaWave]

[align=center]I thought I said to ask for help.

 

Omega's Famous Rants

 

(OCG Fix)

"When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand."

 

(Ratings)

Picture: .5/2

OCG: .5/2

Balance: 2/2

Uniqueness: 0/2

 

Total: 3/8 = C (BARELY!)

 

(Rants)

How many times are you gonna keep using ANCIENT OCG?

 

I don't like the picture. Flat out. There is to little going on, that render has been used to death, and I can even see a Trademark or some form of text on the bottom left corner.

 

Like I said, your OCG is old! Look at more recent cards for examples of the newer OCG.

 

I gave you 2 for Balance this time because put in the right kind of deck, the burn effect could be somewhat useful.

 

This card is not original at all. There are a million cards just like it, it's very bland and generic. Not unique at all. Typical Burn FIRE monster.

 

You need to start sending me messages before you make these cards so we can fix them up.

 

And that's the bottomline, because the jabroni said so![/align]