◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Tell me what i need to correct and ill gladly fix it up. Effective immediately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 FAirly good could improve a lot of them especially the second one because it says only when 5 dark attributes and you can activate it. The underlinded bit should be then instead:-( 3.8/5.1:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Tell me what i need to correct and ill gladly fix it up. Effective immediately. Card 1 Grammar errors, it should be Graveyard + Deck. Card 2 DARK not dark attribute. Graveyard. Card 3 Life Points Card 4 LIGHT Also overpowered, if your monsters are destroyed due to a mirror force etc. you can get them back via main phase 2. Card 5 Graveyard, Spell and Trap Cards Card 6 OCG error LIGHT or DARK Graveyard Dont say Zone. Card 7 Cards Overpowered, someone can use spells be4 hand be4 they use it, then they wont suffer the after effect. Card 8 Deck, LIGHT, DARK Possible OCG error. Card 9 LIGHT, DARK, Graveyard, Cards. Possible OCG error. Overall Nice pictures i must say ^_^ Just work on your Grammar and OCG. ^_^ Nice cards tho ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 I love the pics man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 All right i'll fix up the mistakes.....Thank you DJ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Hey nice they are really good for a fairly NEW member, loads of potential i like them you could go far in card making. 7to8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Pretty cool, gramamr needs hel, but cool.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Grammar problems, good pics. A couple are overpowered. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Thank you. If you want to see a perfect creation, I will be making "Perfection" cards, starting after my "Newfound" Series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Some errors, but good idea 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 effects are a little too simple, but pics are great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 These were extremely old cards back from when I first started, so the grammar and all that are way wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 yeah well someone revived the thread, and I felt I should judge them fairly. Which you did well on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Hmmm... I wonder who would go back just to look at my old cards. <. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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