Lucas Maximus Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Ok i quickly came up with this card, found a pic, and made it tonight, all through bordemness, i hope you like it! I am aware it has errors in its effect, but i need some help with my OCG, you can surly tell where im coming from with the cards effect though? Also if anybody can do me a favour i will pay them 2reps if they can remove the sig from behind the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Plz comment on my thread, tell me what you think of my utterly random card, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 whats the point? i dont see how the effect is useful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 needs a little OCG help, it is useful in some cases and not in some cases....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 whats the point? i dont see how the effect is useful Well, lol, im not going to get p****d at you for making any comments today, lol.But as i said this is just a random card on a day at the office (in other words i was bored, so i made this) im just seeing how it will fare out? Im sorry if you dont like it, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 WTF! I see no use in it, you are constantly decreasing LP >_< WTF!2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 no no, its not that i dont like it, i just dont really see how its a useful card, sure u could wipe out your opponents monsters with it, but at a huge cost to your lifepoints, i mean its like an amazingly more expensive rageki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 WTF! I see no use in it' date=' you are constantly decreasing LP >_< WTF!2/10[/quote'] Ok i see you gave me a harsh 2/10 but instead of just giving me that at least tell me how i can improve should i make it that it eats away at both of your Life Points or just your opponents, tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 It's not that bad, actually. And Raigeki is banned anyway, this wouldn't even be limited (semi-limited perhaps). -Picture: 7/10 (stretched, fix that, otherwise nice)-Effect: 8/10 (not bad)-Balance: 8.5/10 (it's not that unbalanced. A less-powerful Ring of Destruction, which is limited. It may be underpowered)-Originality: 9/10 (nice concept)-OCG: 4/10 (horrible, needs drastic fixes. If I'm in the mood later, I'll give you the correct version)-Overall: 7.3 (not very bad - OCG and picture fixes first of all, and maybe some tweaking, and it may easily hit an 8.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 so u destroy a monster, take huge damage, then destroy another monster, take even more damage, and if there is still a monster in the field u destroy that and take even more damage..the effect is : destroy all monsters on the field then inflict damage to your Life Points equal to the combined ATK of all monsters destroyed......how is that helpful? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 so u destroy a monster' date=' take huge damage, then destroy another monster, take even more damage, and if there is still a monster in the field u destroy that and take even more damage..the effect is : destroy all monsters on the field then inflict damage to your Life Points equal to the combined ATK of all monsters destroyed......how is that helpful?[/quote'] It's helpful againt Tokens, swarming monsters, when you have Waboku... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Lets say your opponent has 300 Life Points and a Blue Eyes on the field. play somethin like Waboku or somethin to save your Life Points you can destroy Blue Eyes then the cards destroyed summon a weakling and attackSome OCG problems and you don't need a enter after Graveyard 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Unlike the others i dont mind it, however the writing needs removing from the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imadjinn Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 WABOKU?! Damage by effect is not Battle Damage. Do you people even PLAY the freaking game?! Kiss of the Crimson MoonSpell / EquipA monster equipped with this card is sent to the Graveyard. When a monster is sent to the Graveyard by this card, inflict damage to you equal to its ATK. Then, equip this card to another monster. So, basically, it destroys every face-up monster on the field and inflicts damage to you equal to their combined ATK. Indeed, not bad against tokens or things like Spirit Reaper and Marshmallon. Summon a Des Wombat and equip the Des Wombat last to only take 1600 damage. Decent. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Overpowered, good pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Overpowered' date=' good pic. 7/10[/quote'] I don't think so. It's basically a Ring of Destruction that effects all monsters on the field that only hurts you, which isn't that bad. I might suggest that you change the effect to something a less sever for you, like: Destroy the monster equipped with this card. Then decrease your Life Points equal to monster's Level x 300 points. Instead of sending this card to Graveyard, equip this card to another monster on the field. If you cannot, destroy this card. This way, you won't lose as much LP, like a Monarch would be 1800 instead of 2400 and all level 4 monsters are only 1200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 The point of this card is to equip it to your opponent's monsters... Not your own. You can also combo this with Barrel Behind the Door. It's okay, but pretty darn risky =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 he never said tha, it states u have too equip it to a monster on the field, say your opponent has 3 monsters, and u have 2, once you've destroyed all ur opponents monsters, you HAVE to equip it to your own, so yeah he needs to change the grammar and make it clearer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 The point of this card is to equip it to your opponent's monsters... Not your own. You can also combo this with Barrel Behind the Door. It's okay' date=' but pretty darn risky =/[/quote'] Am sorry about my mistake i will edit that card for later use and latly (like after i posted this card) i have really been working hard on my OCG, i will post many more cards in the near future anyways the comments look more good then bad so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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