~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 8)Enjoy and please leave a comment.The support cards should be done in 2 weeks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 There are a few errors with your cards i shall point them out as i feel your cards are good and need no mistakes ^_^ Card 1 i dont thinks theres an ' in Point's. You missed the word field out on the last line. wheres its DEF? ATK equals? Card 2 You should say ' both players' instead of you and your opponent. Card 3 you need a commar after turn, in 'once per turn' Very good though ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imadjinn Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 The second and third cards are good, but for the first, you have not stated how its ATK is calculated. Also, you have given it ? DEF but DEF is not mentioned in its card text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 I feel that the pictures could be better, and they're some other errors around too, but pretty good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 very good but there are a few errors, read DJ-Osiris's post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 I can't see the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 I can't see them either, they are just white squares with red x's in the middle >__> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Um, what happend to the cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 8)Enjoy and please leave a comment.The support cards should be done in 2 weeks Can't see cards?????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Am I going Card Blind again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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