Tagada-Massacre Posted July 28, 2010 Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 Hello =DThis is my first card ! Please , correct my Ocg because i'm french and i don't really speak english ^^Enjoy (Y) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 28, 2010 Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 LP=Life Pointsremove the "s" in damageSpell or Trap Card is in capitalization.Overall seems useful in a Infernity Deck8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted July 28, 2010 Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 capitalize Spell and Trap, put s's on activate, capitilaze Graveyard and LP=Life Points good for a first card though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted July 28, 2010 Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 This is phenomenal for a first card, especially since you say you're French. I've seen Americans, possbily older than you, with worse grammar than that. For one, the effect is an actual effect! Yes, aside from a few OCG errors I don't know how to correct, the card is very good. The effect isn't something I've seen before, and I quite like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada-Massacre Posted July 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 Fixed ! Thanks =D but why usefull on a infernity deck ? ^^ Edit : Do you know why I can't save my cards ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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