My first topic ... thing "Eternal monsters"

[jonadiah]

This my first post, hence the name of the post. Probably alot of issues with the words, and there are 2 pics I don't really like, try to guess which 2.

Anyway, these are my Eternal monsters, zombie-type monsters that can't be destroyed.

Lore:This card cannot be Destroyed in Battle (Damage Calculation still applies), whenever you take Damage from a battle involving this card, reduce this cards attack by the Damage you took, if this card switches to Defence mode, destroy this card.

Lore:This Card cannot be Destroyed in Battle. When you take Battle Damage from a Battle involving this Card, this Card loses ATK equal to the Damage you Took. When this Card loses ATK, Destroy 1 Monster your Opponent Controls who has less DEF than the ATK this Card lost. Once per Turn, you can Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card you Control to return this Card's ATK to 1000. If this Card is in Defense Position, Destroy this Card.

Lore:This card cannot be Destroyed in Battle (Damage is still calculated), when you take Damage from a Battle involving this card, reduce this cards ATK by the damage you took. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Lifepoints to return this cards ATK to 2100. If this card changes Battle position, Destroy this card.

Lore:This Card cannot be Destroyed in Battle. As long as this Card is Face-Up on the Field, "Eternal" monsters you Control cannot lose ATK by their own Effects. If this Card is in Defense Position, it is Destroyed.

Lore:This Card cannot be Destroyed in Battle. When you take Battle Damage from a Battle involving this Card, this Card loses ATK equal to the Damage you took. By Destroying 2 Spell or Trap Cards you Control, you can Return this Card's ATK to 2300, and Destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards your Opponent Controls.

Lore:This Card cannot be Destroyed in Battle. When you take Damage from a Battle involving this Card, this Card loses ATK equal to the Damage you Took. Once per Turn, you can Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card that your Opponent Controls. By Discarding 1 Card from your Hand to the Graveyard, Return this Cards ATK to 1500. If this Card is in Defense Position, Destroy it.

Lore:This Card cannot be Destroyed in Battle. When this Card is involved in a Battle, after the Damage Step, this Card loses ATK equal to the Damage You took in the battle. Once per Turn You can Discard 1 Card from Your Hand to Return this Monsters ATK to 2500. If this Card is in Defense Position, Destroy it.

Lore:This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this Card can only be Special Summoned by Sacrificing 2 "Eternal" Monsters you Control. This Card cannot be Destroyed in Battle. When you take Battle Damage from a Battle involving this Card, this Card loses ATK equal to the Damage you took. By Sacrificing 1 monster you Control, this Card Gains ATK equal to the Damage you took during your Opponents last Battle Phase. If this Card is in Defense Position, Destroy this Card.

 

And their are mah Eternal monsters, feel free to leave comments. Tell me if they're good or not.

[Legiit]

OCG errors but pics seem solid and pretty mch every else is good 6/10

[Phantom M.C.]

newb cards that aren't WTF. a rather large amount of ocg errors, but its okay. 5.5/10

[Face McShooty]

nice cards dude, i like the whole "Eternal" sub-type, its interesting

[jonadiah]

Could someone leave a comment about what the OCG errors are, like capitilization problems, or just how I'm saying things, or what? Thanks for the help with the OCG

[Phantom M.C.]

1st one:

Lore:This card cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage Calculation applies). When you take battle damage involving this card, this card loses ATK equal to the battle damage taken. When this card is switched to Defense Position, destroy this card.