My First Card

[tepac007]

I hate when people use "Obelisk the Tormentor" on me so i made this.

[Master of Chaos™]

I am sorry but couple of things:

 

1-Don't Use Attachments here. Just Click on the Card once you make it and below it will appear a Code. Copy and Paste it into a Thread and your Card will Show up.

2-The OCG is Incorrect. There are a lot of Mistakes so i can't really State them but read some other Yu-Gi-Oh Cards that are Similar to this one and you will see what is incorrect.

3-Don't make Cards that Counter other Specific Cards. They aren't really Original and they aren't really any Creative so please make Original Cards from now on.

 

But for a first Card i would have to give it a 6/10. For a first Card.

[tepac007]

I am sorry but couple of things:

 

1-Don't Use Attachments here. Just Click on the Card once you make it and below it will appear a Code. Copy and Paste it into a Thread and your Card will Show up.

2-The OCG is Incorrect. There are a lot of Mistakes so i can't really State them but read some other Yu-Gi-Oh Cards that are Similar to this one and you will see what is incorrect.

3-Don't make Cards that Counter other Specific Cards. They aren't really Original and they aren't really any Creative so please make Original Cards from now on.

 

But for a first Card i would have to give it a 6/10. For a first Card.

Sorry for the attachment i didn't know how to insert a card without it being unreadable.

Can you please tell me what "OCG" means?

[Master of Chaos™]

OCG stands for Official Card Grammar. That means OCG is the Text written on every Card, are there mistakes is it written properly everything.

[Hungry Panda]

fake type, Your OCG is smashed, and the name isnt very creative. but besides that. i like the pic and your new. so 4.5/10.