Lucas Maximus Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Here it is, i may base a set on this card, like give it some spell and other monster cards to help it out. Plz rate :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 right... 1. rank his level down to four2. good effect but i think it would be better worded if... As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the activation and destroy any spell cards on the field. For every card destroyed by this effect, this card gains 300 ATK.3. the pics kinda squashed, i could fix it for you if u wanted? if so just PM me with it in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 right... 1. rank his level down to four2. good effect but i think it would be better worded if... As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' negate the activation and destroy any spell cards on the field. For every card destroyed by this effect, this card gains 300 ATK.3. the pics kinda squashed, i could fix it for you if u wanted? if so just PM me with it in[/quote'] Right thanks for your reply i may edit the effect, if i have time, i will pm you the pic later so you can mend it for me (Thanks alot) This level should stay at 5 because it also negates spell cards on your side of the field so its ATK could easily be 2100 or more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 true actually, maybe make it 6 then? no prob, its a good card, congrat's i'll rate it when you've fixed the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 make him LV4 and add "by his effect" after "Spell cards negated". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 make him LV4 and add "by his effect" after "Spell cards negated". I will leave him as lv.5 as what i posted up there^_^ Following 'Azwolop's comment, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 I agree with the others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Right im glad you all like it, Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARMCARDMAKER22 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 you said it negates the activation of spell cards so he is not going t have a lot of attack points because only works with spell cards on the field so change it to 4, i would not sacrifice a monster but i like the pic and the effect is good, change it yo 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 only some small OCG problems and i agree with all the above posts but its kinda good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 you said it negates the activation of spell cards so he is not going t have a lot of attack points because only works with spell cards on the field so change it to 4' date=' i would not sacrifice a monster but i like the pic and the effect is good, change it yo 4[/quote'] Actually i will also negate the effects of those spell cards like 'Swords of revealing light' it will also negate equip spell cards and this monsters ATK could easily be 2100 + if that is the case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Underpowered. Change to Face-up Continuous Spell Card and good pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 OCg is way off. sry.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Aaw... my name didn't get picked... TT__TT oh well, at least we were able to help you decide on a name! ^__^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 There was a name thing? What did you say Heartskeeper? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 right... 1. rank his level down to four2. good effect but i think it would be better worded if... As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' negate the activation and destroy any spell cards on the field. For every card destroyed by this effect, this card gains 300 ATK.3. the pics kinda squashed, i could fix it for you if u wanted? if so just PM me with it in[/quote'] No no no that's all wrong First off, if that happened, its ATK can go up to 4000 [though it prolly won't] But it can easily get up higher. Destroying Spell Cards is bad. Heavy Storm in a box. VERY BAD IDEA. Wording needs work: "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Spell Cards cannot be activated. Also, the effects of all face-up Spell Cards on the field are negated. For every effect negated by this card's effect, increase its ATK by 300." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 I agree with the guy above me. I'll just add that you, no matter how many mistakes you have, did a great job. A long as you put in your effort and time, its great! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Wow, you are a great person man. Geeze. wow. lol, well, I guess it's true.^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Wow' date=' you are a great person man. Geeze. wow. lol, well, I guess it's true.^_^[/quote'] Guess what's true? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 about wat glass said about no matter if it' good or not, at least you tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Luke they're wicked could improve grammar though:? 7/10:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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