Archwing Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Well im cleaning out my old cards i found these, They were inspired by two handdrawn cards my brother made and wow...They seem too complex for me but whatever, So these are more like my brothers cards then they are mine but lets see what you guys all think of them. ( I just really like the names for some reason >_> )LORE:This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 10 Spell cards from your deck out of play. During your Battle Phase you can pay 200 Life points to place 1 "Curse Counter" on one of your opponents monsters. If this card destroys a monster with a "Curse Counter" on it you can return 2 cards from out of play to your hand. You opponent cannot Tribute or Synchro Summon with a card that has a "Curse Counter" on it. If "Obsidian The Twisted" is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle remove all "Curse Counters" from the field.LORE:This card cannot be Special Summoned. During your Standby Phase discard 2 cards or pay 1000 Life points. If this card is the only monster you control you can pay 500 Life points to destroy all monsters on the field with 1000 ATK or less. This card cannot be destroyed by Spell or Trap cards. Each time this card destroys a monster your opponent control place 1 "Wrath Counter" on this card. If this card has 5 "Wrath counters on it pay 1000 Life points and remove all "Wrath Counters" from this card. If you opponent Synchro Summons a monster with over 2800 ATK its effect is negated. If your opponent Ritual Summons a monster you can pay 500 life points to increase the ATK of this card by 200 points. If your opponent summons a LIGHT monster to the field you can draw 1 card. If your opponent activates an FLIP effect you can pay Life points equal to the amount of "Wrath Counters" on this card x300 to negate the effect of the flipped monster. During your Draw Phase you can send 3 cards in your Graveyard out of play to draw 2 extra cards. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, Discard the top 10 cards from your Deck. These actually one more "Onyxus The Cruel" But i cant find it...yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 woh awesomenes man but second pic looks blurry 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 woh awesomenes man but second pic looks blurry 9.5/10 I dont know why the pic would be blurry, its from wanderley...but thanks for the rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 On the second card... This card cannot be Special Summoned. During your Standby Phase discard 2 cards or pay 1000 Life points (So it's one or the other? What happens when you can't pay? It be better it it was "take 1000 points of damage"). If this card is the only monster you control you can pay 500 Life points to destroy all monsters on the field with 1000 ATK or less. This card cannot be destroyed by Spell or Trap cards. Each time this card destroys a monster your opponent control place 1 "Wrath Counter" on this card. If this card has 5 "Wrath counters on it pay 1000 Life points and remove all "Wrath Counters" from this card(What happens then. You just wasted 1000 Life points and took out 5 wrath counters.). If you opponent Synchro Summons a monster with over 2800 ATK its effect is negated(jumps from counters to synchro's?). If your opponent Ritual Summons a monster you can pay 500 life points to increase the ATK of this card by 200 points(Now it's on rituals?). If your opponent summons a LIGHT monster to the field you can draw 1 card.(Oh my, this gets more random by the sentence) If your opponent activates an FLIP effect you can pay Life points equal to the amount of "Wrath Counters" on this card x300 to negate the effect of the flipped monster(Now we're at flips. Ohh, and you removed all 5 wrath counters, so you can't use this effect. Ohh, and if yo had 5 wrath counters, 1500 Life points to negate a flip effect?). During your Draw Phase you can send 3 cards in your Graveyard out of play to draw 2 extra cards(Fix the ocg here, it's wrong). If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, Discard the top 10 cards from your Deck(WHAT! WHY? NO I SHALL NOT!). This thing is immensely underpowered and not to mention wayyyy to random. It's so random in fact, that it jumped from synchro's to flip effect monsters. Really? Flip effects? And then light came out of no where. My advice is get your effect organization straight and stick to themes in your cards. Don't just throw effects in willy nilly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 (So it's one or the other? What happens when you can't pay? It be better it it was "take 1000 points of damage"). Well its ment to be your choice, Destroy your own deck or pay 1000 life points.(What happens then. You just wasted 1000 Life points and took out 5 wrath counters.)Wrath counters are bad they make it cost more to negate effects and if you get too many you HAVE to pay 1000 lifepoints. Its like the monster got so pissed of it spun around and hit you in a Bloodthirsty rage....I guess thats why he named it that :P(jumps from counters to synchro's?)[I dont really know why... Like i said, my brother made the effects, i just copied it down and found a picture for it.(Now it's on rituals?)I guess he was trying to stop me from useing any of my power monsters.(Oh my, this gets more random by the sentence)Yes it dose...(Now we're at flips. Ohh, and you removed all 5 wrath counters, so you can't use this effect. Ohh, and if yo had 5 wrath counters, 1500 Life points to negate a flip effect?)Im not even sure how that worked o_OThis thing is immensely underpowered and not to mention wayyyy to random. It's so random in fact, that it jumped from synchro's to flip effect monsters. Really? Flip effects? And then light came out of no where. Ha Like i said at first these are my brothers cards, When he made this i had a LIGHT deck that had alot of ritual monsters and he hated man eater bug so i guess he made this as a anti me card....My brother was a arsehat, THATS how he beat me all the time -_- that and the fact he took all the Dragon cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 lolololololol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Bump. Hmm I cant find that last card he made >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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