CCharlie999 Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Rate/give OCG Advise please. I know my OCG sucks. Any help would be appreciated. If I update the OCG, then update your rating, or don't rate until I change it. Razorwind | Level 6 | Wind | Winged-Beast :: EFFECTDuring your Standby Phase, this Monster can be sacrificed to send all cards on the field to the respective player's decks. Shuffle the decks. During your End Phase, you can spend 800 Life Points to return this card to the Deck. Shuffle the Deck. Thanks for viewing :] -Charlie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Your OCG could use some work like you said.So I'll give you my basic OCG list. I think the cards overpowered really, it's kind of a non-lethal continuous bomber which could get overused? Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFas a result of battle = by battleone/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...attack mode = Attack Positionhis/ her = they/ theirmay = canface up = face-up attribute = Attributetype = Typeritual = Ritualmonster card zone = Monster Card Zone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 you must have alot of time on your hands to do all those corrections lol no offense any way i agree with guy above dud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 you must have alot of time on your hands to do all those corrections lol no offense any way i agree with guy above dud lol. I just grouped a collection and saved it for my notes. I get it out when I feel someone has made a few errors so that they can refer to it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 =D Did someone ask for OCG Help!? "During your Standby Phase, you can Tribute this card to return all cards on the field to their respective owner's Deck. During your End Phase, you can pay 800 Life Points to add this card from your Graveyard to your Deck." The bold is the necessary fix.Liam is right, it's Overpowered. I have a suggestion underlined. By adding that it makes it less Overpowering because your current effect means it can be returned from out of play as well as from the Graveyard. By adding from the graveyard, this card is now vulnerable to Macro Cosmos, Dimensional Fissure, etc. Taking away its abusive nature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Overpowered. Extremely overpowered. Would be Forbidden as soon as it came into circulation (but it obviously won't). The last effect is just random, and doesn't really have much of a use. Especially for Wind decks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Actually, this would be perfect for my RL deck. It's an Aslla Bounce I recently made after getting some Mist Valley cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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