A couple new "Amazoness" monsters. (Input and/or opinions appreciated)

[Dandelo]

Have at them.

 

 

If you control 2 or more "Amazoness" monsters or a face-up "Amazoness Village", you can Normal Summon this card without Tribute. Whenever an "Amazoness" monster you control is destroyed by the effect of a card your opponent controls, your opponent's card is removed from play.

 

 

You can only control 1 "Amazoness Heroine". This card gains 300 ATK for each face-up monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, if this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, your opponent must Tribute 1 monster they control or discard 1 monster in their hand with a Level equal to or lower than the destroyed monster's. When this card is removed from the field, if you do not control 2 or more "Amazoness" monsters, remove it from play.

[Codeson]

Maybe some of the pictures may be inappropriate but i dont know. The card effects are good

[Dandelo]

Hmm, I think they're just as clothed as already existing "Amazoness" cards, if that's what you're referring to. But i'm glad you like effects, thanks.

[Lexadin]

Both of them shure look like Amazoness.

 

Vanguard: Pic fits the name and vise versa.

OCG: Whenever=Each time, your opponent's card is removed from play. = remove that card from play.

The effect shurely is ballanced.

 

Heroine: Tbh, she doesn't really have the Amazoness look over her.

OCG: the last if=while

Effect is slightly Oped. I would lower its ATK to 1100-1000.

 

Both of them a 7.9/10

[Shinobi Phoenix]

Hmm, I think they're just as clothed as already existing "Amazoness" cards, if that's what you're referring to. But i'm glad you like effects, thanks.

 

Considering that's a picture of Elena from Street Fighter 3 and I'm pretty sure that's official UDON art, there's no way it's inappropriate.

 

 

 

 

The Vanguard is fine, but Heroine needs to be toned down. The Level Limit is too restricting toward the opponent who might not even have a monster of the same level to use and the card itself goes too far as far as forcing your opponent to kill off his own people or let you do it. Either way, he loses a monster, so it's very one-sided. I get it's anti-swarm, but it's going too far as a single card.

 

Maybe change that last line to "3 or more" Amazoness, since this is a card that does a lot of work by itself; it should be harder to keep it.

 

Also, it should only be allowed to attack once more period, not keep getting to attack. The natural ATK power is fine, so lowering it will do no good, it's the effect itself.

[Dandelo]

Hrrmm, never played Street Fighter, so I wouldn't have known, haha. Well, thanks for the comments and I made the changes.

[Dandelo]

Buhhh... bump.