crocruler Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 have a look at this feisty fighter As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, when a Warrior-Type monster you control attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Whenever a Warrior-Type Monster deals damage to your opponent they discard a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironcore Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 OCG error when Warrior-Type monsters on your side of the field attack should be when a Warrior-Type monster you control attacks.also this card is OPD,make it a level 6 and have the second effect only make your opponent discard a card,nice picture though 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 ok ironcore, wat if isaid your opponent takes 500 points of damage, forget about discarding and keep it lv5? OCG error when Warrior-Type monsters on your side of the field attack should be when a Warrior-Type monster you control attacks.also this card is OPD,make it a level 6 and have the second effect only make your opponent discard a card,nice picture though 5/10.ironcore, wat if isaid your opponent takes 500 points of damage, forget about discarding and keep it lv5? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironcore Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Nah coz if your opponent take 500 damage and the card is a level 5 then its still OPD coz its easy to summon with only one tribute.It could be a level 5 if you make the effect discard a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 ok thanks ill change hope more peple comment fixed now how about some more comments and ratings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Pic doesn't really seem to fit YGO imo. Name is good.OCG fix: When a Warrior-Type monster you control attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Each time a Warrior-Type monster inflicts battle damage to your opponent, they discard a card.I would lower its ATK to make it more ballanced, i suggest something around 2000. A 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 ok thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironcore Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 ok now i can give you 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 The picture and effect are nice and appealing, but try to avoid pictures with signitures in them. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 thanks for rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fLare2 Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 There is room for much more improvment, come back to that card sometime when your creativity and originality is improved. Overall 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted August 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2010 :angry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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