My First Card

[Defel]

[Lord_of_Cards_55]

Pic is nice but your OCG needs work. Try changing the ATK increase to just 200 or 300 cuz its easier to understand. Here ill try an OCG fix: You can Tribute 1 face-up DARK monster you control to have this card gain 200 ATK. This effect can be used once per turn.

[crocruler]

balanced nice pic, not sure about ocg though, so pretty good for a new member. 7/10

[Legokun]

Once per turn, you may tribute 1 DARK monster on your side of the field. Increase the ATK of this monster by 250 until the end of the Turn.

Not bad for a newb. 7/10

[exstriker]

cool card

[Βyakuya]

I like the PIc, but fix your OCG and grammar. The effect seems a little OPed, but its not bad. 5.5/10

[Lexadin]

Simple card.

Pic is somewhat unclear, I would suggest using pics from Deviantart or Jazin Kay's.

OCG is fixed.

Effect is maybe somewhat UPed. Maybe add that you can Summon it with only 1 Tribute (but only if its a DARK) or something like that.

A 7/10, not ad for a 1st try.

[ironcore]

ok you've had enough people bugging about OCG so i wont,but the effects is a little OPD,make it last only to the end phase,over all 8 /10.

[Legokun]

I actually helped instead of just saying there are errors.