MechManiac Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Yeah I was bored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 THE GRAMMAR IS WAY OFF. And it's way strong.4/10 I BEAT DJ OSIRIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Yankee, i hope you feel so happy now, i hope your life changed for the better... lol a few grammar errors like cards, and the OCG is wrong i believe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 yeah,my life is complete. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Some gramar errors, but not too bad...Good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 What are the grammar errors?????????? If there are grammar errors what are they? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Well, for 1, you don't hav to say counter trap cards, i'll get mor in a litle bit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 it should be Trap Cards, not Trap cards also the OCG is bad too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Well' date=' for 1, you don't hav to say counter trap cards, i'll get mor in a litle bit...[/quote'] What do you mean by that, I want it to be Counter Trap cards. it should be Trap Cards' date=' not Trap cards also the OCG is bad too.[/quote'] But that would be OCG. And I forget to capitalize one word, what's the big deal? Because I wrote 'cards' instead of 'Cards', it automatically kills the entire card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Trap Cards is classed as grammar, as you didnt cap the C on cards. And your overall OCG kills the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Trap Cards is classed as grammar' date=' as you didnt cap the C on cards. And your overall OCG kills the card.[/quote'] Can you tell me what is wrong the Official Card Grammar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Its sentences are too long and they drag, you need to place a commar somewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Wow,I just noticed somthing, it's like a Rhino with a Chicken or rooster stuff ont he head, lol, sry, I am retarded, I just noticed this!Sry, please go on Dj and maniac. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Its sentences are too long and they drag' date=' you need to place a commar somewhere.[/quote'] So that's what kills it??? I guess I'll add in a comma if it really satisfies you. Wow' date='I just noticed somthing, it's like a Rhino with a Chicken or rooster stuff ont he head, lol, sry, I am retarded, I just noticed this!Sry, please go on Dj and maniac. lol[/quote'] Okay then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 the fact no commar was there killed it, but if you add 1 in, in the correct place it should sound fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 OK I will edit it tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 alright just errors let you down still 7/10:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 errors here and there, but there okay 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Good pic, a little overpowered. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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