My First Card

[Indytig10]

This is my first card. Being a frequent CP player, I made a card for my penguin. Tell me ways I could improve, like change level, or the OCG. This is my first card!

[shelds9]

its not strong enough. if you had support cards for it, it could be better. also ocg is a little off.

[Applez Are Coolz]

You could have used other Type, as Penguin isn't a real one. Effect is O.K, but change your OCG to this: "Everytime your opponent attacks a monster you control other than "Indytig10", negate the attack."

 

Picture could be sightly better. 5/10

[Gastonia]

use Aqua as type not Penguin

 

for the ocg:

When a Water-Attribute monster targets a monster, during your opponent's Battle Phase, the targetted monster cannot be destroyed by battle this turn. (When the targetted monster includes "Indytig" in it's card name negate this card's effect.)

 

BTW

 

change his level to 3 (maximum 4)

[Card Board Box]

for the ocg:

When a Water-Attribute monster

 

It's just WATER. There's no need to put Attribute.

 

[.GhostRyder]

its not strong enough. if you had support cards for it, it could be better. also ocg is a little off.

Just saying 'OCG is off' isnt helping

Effect Fix:

When a Water-Attribute monster Targets a monster on your side of the field, The targeted monster cannot be attacked during the battle Phase of the turn this effect is activated.

Alternativly you could look at Gastonia's post above.

Way underpowered and Image isnt the best. Plus if its a Member card you can still be creatove with the name. Maybe somthing like 'Indytig - The Penguin Warrior

Overall I will give you a

5.4/10

[Nammac1993]

Thank god this is you first card because if it wasn't...............

[Shizuku Oikawa]

Thank god this is you first card because if it wasn't...............

Isn't that kinda mean?

 

Now for the Actual Effect Fix:

When a WATER monster your opponent controls attacks a monster you control other than "Indytig10", negate the attack.

 

Underpowered, seeing how it can easily be runned over.

lol, Club Penguin Pic.

Well, the effect was easily understandable, but needs a bit of work

6/10

[Indytig10]

Card updated with new OCG, increased ATK and DEF, 1 level lower (just in case), and improved artwork.

[Gastonia]

Card updated with new OCG, increased ATK and DEF, 1 level lower (just in case), and improved artwork.

 

just a level lower and change the type to Aqua

[.GhostRyder]

I will now change my rating to:

7/10

[Indytig10]

Updated again. :D

[Gastonia]

Updated again. :D

 

also update your autograph