Death12328 Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 um, the ocg iss way of, and I THINK it is a bit strong.6/10i'll post the real grammar in just a sec, wait, no, DJ has that XD I BEAT DJ AGAIN, 2 in 1 day! omfg! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 beginning is not needed The OCG is very off, i cant think of how to correct it, well i can but i cant be bothered lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 [sarcasm]Thanks guys that advice was very helpful, now I know what to fix[/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 As long as this card remains face-up on the field, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. During a Standby Phase that a player discarded the same number of card from their hand as the the number of card in their opponent's hand, that player draws the same number f cards that was discarded from their hand. OMFG, I cn't do that right, the way you did your effect is so bad (No offence), that I just can't get it right, that is as good as I can do, sry. I tired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 You forgot the "Rounded Down" part... the point of this card is to mill but also to shrink either hand, eliminate the other's threats... With 0 ATK and just 2150 DEF you think the opponent would set up a Zero Gravity + Nightmare Wheel combo to actually use this to their advantage, hell dark world loves this effect.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Yeah, well, the rounded down thing didn't make sence to me, sry. I tried =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 True, true you tried.... As for Rounded Down, its like you discarded 6 and drew 5, thats rounded down... True its math, but then again oh well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 ok could improve a bit though:-( 6.9/10:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 could impreove, but its alright 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Yeah, well, it's ok, hope I helped, SOMEHOW. Nice card, kind of =/ lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Work on your grammar and it would be perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Reduce DEF to 2100, good effect and pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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