Warrior Set

[Guest fLare2]

This is the start of warrior-type deck

please comment and give some feedback about the pros and cons of the following:

 

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If this card was drawn durring your 7th Standby-Phase, then you can re-activate 3 of the card effects you activated before reaching your 7th Standby-Phase. Durring each of your 3 Standby-Phases, you can re-activate any card effects you have activated before. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Negate the Attack of your opponenets monsters equal to the Combined amount of cards you re-activated using the card's effect.

 

 

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When this card is sent to the Graveyard, if the battle damage this card has inflicted is higher than 2000, you can add 1 Warrior-Type monster to the top of your deck, then shuffle your deck.If the Warrior-Type monster has been destroyed and sent to the Graveyard after 5 turns, then Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your field in face-up Attack Position.

 

 

 

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Destroy 3 cards on your opponents field, durring your 2nd Standby-Phase decrease your LP by 3000. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, your opponent can select up to 3 cards from his Graveyard and return them to his hand.

 

bump....

[LiAM]

They look okay, not to keen on the holo.

 

Your main OCG errors are:

 

LP = Life Points

as a result of battle = by battle

deck = Deck

Negate = negate

Attack = attack

Combined = total

:)

 

Overall they look okay, the first card confuses me a bit though.

 

7.9/10