Traxxon Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Hi, fellow forumites. This is my first ever attempt at Yu-Gi-Oh card making, so expect the card to be unbalanced or with TCG grammar mistakes xD. Any comments/advice will be very appreciated. Thx! The card after the changes were implemented: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 A few OCG errors, picture is a bit unrealistic for a card =/ Plus it's really underpowered. Only 100 Life Points lost? 3.3/10 (sorry) Maybe increase the Life Point damage a bit, or change the criteria for being able to use it :) Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFas a result of battle = by battleone/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...attack mode = Attack Positionhis/ her = they/ theirmay = canface up = face-up attribute = Attributetype = Typeritual = Ritualmonster card zone = Monster Card Zone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 It seems like a okay card for a newbie....I guess. God why are their so many newbies o_O the OCG is good for a newbie but why a picture of a flame for a "Purgatory"? whatever 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traxxon Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Thx, for my first card I cant expect roses, shall I? LoL. Im changing the card right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Revan of the Sith Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 i like the religious affilliation to that card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traxxon Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Check the card again, I made significant changes. Sorry if my abilities dont match yours, im starting and its common that I make heavy mistakes whem im a newbie. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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