A new Set: Demon's Strike

[Mugendramon]

Just so that you know; "Demon King's Castle"'s Image doesn't work as it should.

These are all of my cards based around a "Demon" Archtype I invented... I suppose.

This card can be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 1 "Demon" monster. If this card destroys a LIGHT or Fairy-Type monster, remove it from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard.

When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Demon" Synchro Monster, you can reduce the Levels of all Synchro Material Monsters to 1.

When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Demon" monster, you can Tribute it to Special Summon 1 removed from play "Demon" monster.

This card is unaffected by the effect of "Demon" monsters. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of "Demon" monsters in your Graveyard x400.

This is a Vanilla. Why would you need a Lore?

When your opponent's monster attacks this card in face-down Defnse Position, this card becomes an Equip Spell Card equipped to the attacking monster (Damage calculation is not applied). The equipped monster becomes FIRE Attribute and can't attack. When the equipped monster is destroyed, return this card to your hand.

If you draw this card, return it to the Deck and draw 1 card. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Gerhold II, Demon King's Son". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. If this face-down card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Demon" monster from your Graveyard, exept "Gerhold, Demon King".

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Demon" monsters.

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can add 1 "Demon King's Chains" from your Deck to your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Demon" monster from your Graveyard by removing this card from play.

Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Demon" Monsters

Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "Fakod, Demon Knight" you control OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this effect, that monster gains 600 ATK. During battle between a monster equipped with this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the equipped monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

Lore: Yorhk, Demon King's Sevant + 1 or more non-Tuner Synchro Monsters

This card cannot be Summoned unless "Demon King's Throne" is face-up on the field. Remove from play Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card. This card can only be removed from the field by the effect of "Demon King's Throne". Any monster destroyed with "Demon" in its name is returned to the top of the Deck instead of being sent to the Graveyard. When this card is destroyed, return all "Demon" monsters that are removed from play to the Graveyard. Then, search your Deck for 1 "Gerhold's Crown" and Set it on your side of the field.

Activate only when "Yorhk, Demon King's Servant" is face-up on your side of the field. Send 1 "Demon" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Deck.

If you draw this card, return it to the Deck and draw 1 card. You can only equip this card to a Synchro Monster. It cannot attack or change its battle position. If a monster equipped with this card is used as Synchro Material Monster for "Gerhold, Demon King", increase its ATK by 500.

You can only activate this card when "Gerhold's Fire Orb" is in your Graveyard and "Demon King's Chains" is equipped to a monster on your side of the field. When this card is destroyed, destroy 1 "Gerhold, Demon King" to destroy all monsters on the field.

All "Demon" monsters on the field gain 200 ATK. When a "Demon" monster is destroyed, increase the ATK of another "Demon" monster by 500. When this card is destroyed, all monsters on the field become FIRE Attribute.

As long as this card is face-up on the field, "Demon King's Throne" cannot be destroyed. When this card is destroyed, destroy all "Demon" monsters you control.

You can only equip this card to "Gerhold, Demon King" or "Yorhk, Demon King's Servant". Select 1 monster in either player's Graveyard. The equipped monster gains the effect of the selected monster.

Activate only when your oponent Summons a monster while you control 1 "Demon" monster. Remove from play the Summoned monster.

Activate only when a "Demon" monster is triggered by a Trap Card. Tribute 1 monster. Negate and destroy that Trap Card.

"Gerhold, Demon King" + 1 Dragon-Type monster

This card cannot be triggered by Spell or Trap Cards. Once per turn, you can remove from play all cards in your Graveyard. If you do, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each card removed from play by this effect.

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Gerhold's Crown". This card gains the effect of all "Demon" monsters in your Graveyard, except Synchro Monsters. Decrease the ATK of this card by 300 each time any of the effects activates.

Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 "Demon" Synchro Monsters with different names from your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can select and activate one of the following effects:

* This card is unaffected by Spell Cards, until the End Phase.

* This card is uaffected by Trap Cards, until the End Phase.

* This card is uaffected by other Monster's effects, until the End Phase.

You can only activate this card if "Hell Forest" is face-up on the field, during either player's Standby Phase. Any monster that declares an attack this turn is destroyed at the end of the Battle Phase. If a card did not declare an attack this turn, it is changed to Defense Position.

You can only activate this card if "Hell Forest" is face-up on the field, during either player's Main Phase. Destroy all face-up Spell Cards on the field, except "Hell Forest". This turn, face-down Spell or Trap Cards cannot be activated, and neither player can Set Spell or Trap Cards.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Demon" monster on your side of the field while "Gerhold, Demon King" or "Gerhold II, Demon King's Son" is face-up on your side of the field. Your opponent can only select this card as an attack target. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 monster with "Demon" in its name. The selected monster gains this card's effect.

You can only Summon this card while there are at least 5 "Demon" monsters with different names in your Graveyard. This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK. Once per turn, if this card didn't declare an attack, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. If you do, this card cannot attack.

Lore: 1 or more non-Tuner monsters - 1 FIRE Dark Tuner monster

When this card is Dark Synchro Summoned, return all removed from play Synchro Monsters to their Extra Deck. Then, you can destroy Spell or Trap cards on the field equal to the number of Synchro Monsters returned to the Extra Deck by this effect. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can send 1 Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck to the Graveyard. If you do, this card is not destroyed, and any battle damage becomes 0. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can Special Summon 1 Synchro Monster from your Graveyard whose Level is opossite to this card's Level -2.

 

Note: I know this Dark Synchro is crappy, but that's because I see no way to actually do one. On another note, there are two other cards below I somehow wasn't allowed to post in this one. Check them out below.

[corbindorrell]

I like these. I would use them. Some of the pics could use a change but thats whatever. Over All 7.5/10

[Mugendramon]

BUMP I thought more people would see this... sigh...

[Mugendramon]

You can only equip this card to a Level 4 or lower "Demon" monster. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 400. The equipped monster gains the effect of 1 Dragon or Fiend-Type monster in either player's Graveyard.

Lore: Once per turn, you can select and activate one of the following effects, based on the number of Synchro Monsters in your Graveyard:

1+:You can send "Demon" monsters and 1 "Demon" Tuner from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Synchro Monster from your Graveyard whose Level is equal to the combined Level of the monsters sent to the Graveyard by this effect.

2+:You can remove 1 Synchro Monster in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon 1 Synchro Monster from your Graveyard whose Level is lower than the removed from play monster's.

3+:You can remove all Synchro Monsters in your Graveyard from play. If you do, increase the Level of this card by the number of Synchro Monsters removed from play by this effect, and this card is treated as a Dark Tuner monster.

 

BUMP I'm going crazy waiting for someone to [PROFANITY]ing comment on them. Or at least answer the poll! Please

 

BUMP I'm going crazy waiting for someone to [PROFANITY]ing comment on them. Or at least answer the poll! Please

[Phantom M.C.]

please post the lore, it'll be easier for fixes.

[Mugendramon]

I posted the lores of the ones I thought would not be easily seen on the cards themselves. It is not hard to read on most cards, anyway. If you can't see some in particualr which I haven't posted, tell me and I'll make one.

[Phantom M.C.]

its not that, i'm gonna do a complete review on this set, so i need the lores posted, so i can quote from them or make fixes.

[Mugendramon]

Fine. It'll be done in some minutes.

[DaRocBeast]

the effects of some Spell cards "if you draw this card, return it to the deck" makes no sense. nice concept 5/10

[Mugendramon]

There. Lores added.

 

the effects of some Spell cards "if you draw this card, return it to the deck" makes no sense. nice concept 5/10

 

You know, that is so that you won't use the card unless you get it by the Ace Synchro's effect.

 

BUMP. BUMPITY BUMP BUMP.

[Phantom M.C.]

PREPARE TO BE AMAZED BY THIS RIDICULOUSLY LONG REVIEW :D!!!!!!!

 

fakod: This card can be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 1 "Demon" monster. If this card destroys a LIGHT or Fairy-Type monster, remove it from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard.

-you have officially killed LIGHT and fairy decks with this card (especially the lightsworns). fairies aren't known for high atk or def. seeing that you would probably build a deck around this set, its basically 1 tribute for a 2500 atk beatstick with D.D. effect. just so you know, there are DARK fairies too.

 

tevons: When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Demon" Synchro Monster, you can reduce the Levels of all Synchro Material Monsters to 1.

-this card makes absolutely 0 sense, you need the material monsters' total level to equal the synchro monster in order to summon it. care to explain its use?

EDIT: so you need this for the servant? overcomplicating things.

 

rherak: When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Demon" monster, you can Tribute it to Special Summon 1 removed from play "Demon" monster.

bolded: specify, this card or the other "demon" monster.

-

 

herris: This card is unaffected by the effect of "Demon" monsters. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of "Demon" monsters in your Graveyard x400.

-2 stars is either too low, or you lower the x #. 400 is too much for a 2 star.

 

ewis: its a vanilla. but at least its a 1600 atk beatstick.

 

helif: When your opponent's monster attacks this card in face-down Defnse Position, this card becomes an Equip Spell Card equipped to the attacking monster (Damage calculation is not applied). The equipped monster becomes FIRE Attribute and can't attack. When the equipped monster is destroyed, return this card to your hand.

bolded: Defense

underlined: cannot

-i can see this almost as a mini-relinquished. but weaker and more vulnerable. probably good for 1 use only.

 

gerhold's crown: If you draw this card, return it to the Deck. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Gerhold II, Demon King's Son". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand. If this face-down card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Demon" monster from your Graveyard, exept "Gerhold, Demon King".

-the demon king is a synchro, so this is just completely messed up. not going to say more than that.

 

yorhk: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Demon" monsters.

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can add 1 "Demon King's Chains" from your Deck to your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Demon" monster from your Graveyard by removing this card from play.

-3 stars, seriously?

 

Final Rating:

you know what, this is tiring. Sorry to tell you this, but this set at most would be a meh, or 6/10. really don't see how this has any potential. the effects are bland and not creative.

[DaRocBeast]

^lol Galadrien

[Phantom M.C.]

^lol Galadrien

 

well, i WAS expecting more

[touzaikokon]

They're kind of meh. I can see you're being creative with the effects, and you're trying to synergize the cards, but they don't particularly support each other, and a lot of the monsters require Tributes, which slows down the archetype a lot.

[Mugendramon]

Upon the obvious faliure of this Set; I'll completely redesign it.