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Devils dragon: overpowered and some errors, needs background

 

bloodlust: good concept but has errors, needs background

 

shadow: provide actual fusion monsters, overpowered, errors

 

arrowhead: not sure if that's a description or an effect, errors, overpowered

 

drag of des: errors, overpowered

 

volcanic: major error, you say add 1000 atk and def to its atk. maybe underpowered? idk

 

blaze: way overpowered and errors

 

posted shadow twice

 

most of them are good pictures

 

keep trying, its the best way to learn

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OCG errors

Backgrounds needed

OCG fixes:

 

fire= FIRE

light= LIGHT

dark= DARK

water= WATER

wind= WIND

summon= Summoned

grave= Graveyard

demon= Fiend

 

There is no ICE atributte

 

I'll corect the OCG of 4 cards

 

[spoiler=Devil's Dragon:]

 

If your opponent has at least 5 cards in his/her hand you can destroy all the cards in his/her field .For each card you destroyed by this card's effect this card gains 500 ATK and DEF.

 

Because with 900 it was Over Powered.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Blood Lust:]

 

Increase the ATK of all Dragon-Type monsters in your side of the field for his own atributte:

FIRE:300

WATER:200

WIND:200

EARTH:300

LIGHT:200

DARK:400

 

Like this this card is OP= Over Powered

 

 

 

[spoiler= Blaze]

 

Blaze cannot be a Volcanic-Type monster.

 

For each FIRE monster this card on your side of the field this card gains 300 ATK and DEF .

 

And give to Blaze 8 Stars and his ATK and DEF should be beetwen 2500 and 3000.

 

 

 

[spoiler= Shadow]

1 Dragon + 1 DARK monster

When this card is Normal Summoned destroy all non-DARK monsters in the field.

 

 

 

Keep trying!! :D

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1st: Demon = Fiend, OCG looks bad( if you want someone to fix it you should post it below the card itself). Pic needs an background. And I would make its boost max 500 to make it less OP.

 

2nd: Pic is just horrible. And its DARK effect is Oped, lower its boost. All Atributes must be written in Caps (like Fire = FIRE).

 

3rd: Name is kinda boring. Make it an Dragon or a Fiend, Darkness doesn't exist. It's ATK and DEF are way to high lower it back to 2300ish to make it ballanced.

 

4th: Pic is horrible. It's an unspoken rule that Vanilla's never go over the 3000 ATK and if so, it has to be a Lvl 8. And its text makes no sence.

 

5th: Pic is ok. Oped, lower its ATK to 2700ish. OCG is bad.

 

6th: Pic needs background. Maybe a little bit Oped, lower its boost to 800. OCG is bad.

 

7th:Cards is incredibly Oped, lower its ATK and DEF to 0 to make it ballanced.

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