Elementair Set - Looking for some critique

[Arc-Reborn]

Cnc guys. You guys can see why I like Recycle don't you?

 

Elementair - Water

ELE - EN 002

WATER - Fish - 1600 ATK - 1600 DEF

If "Recycle" is face-up on the field, this card gains 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can look at the bottom card of your Deck and based on its type, activate the appropriate effect. • Spell: Until your End Phase, downgrade all WATER monsters by 1 level. •Trap: Special Summon 1 WATER monster with 1500 or less ATK. The Special Summoned monster will have its effect(s) negated. • Monster: Send this card to the Graveyard and draw 2 cards.

 

Elementair - Fire

ELE - EN 001

FIRE - Pyro - 1600 ATK - 1600 DEF

If "Recycle" is face-up on the field, this card gains 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can check the bottom card in your deck, and based on its type activate the appropriate effect: •Spell: Discard your hand and your opponent draws 1 card. •Trap: Send this card to the Graveyard and return all face-up cards to their owner's hands. •Monster: Destroy 1 card on the field, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

[Arc-Reborn]

Comeon, 18 view and 0 replies?!?

[Phantom M.C.]

you posted the wrong lore for fire.

[ChaosIncarn]

Aye, wrong lore posted for the Fire one.

 

As for the cards, I'm surprised to see a card that runs with recycle. On that note, Their effects aren't too bad. Only effects that I would have to question is Fire's ability to bounce all face-up card on the field. That could be a bit much. And Water's special summon ability. You should specifically list where you can special summon said monster from.

 

Other than that, decent cards with fitting images.

 

6/10

[Arc-Reborn]

you posted the wrong lore for fire.

 

Fixed. Anymore critique?

[Arc-Reborn]

Hey guys, anyone, seriously no?

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it's like a earth day set, the top water monster seems more useble because i think alot of water decks use recycle, but it seem like a set that has to wait for a bigger graveyard and a card that suffles your deck so you can get different effect, it's not a bad set, you should make more even if you don't get comments, it gets you experice and allows you to make better cards

[Arc-Reborn]

@ AppleFrog: Yeah, it's generic water support. I'll make more cards. It's just making them takes time.

 

Thanks for the mostly non-existent comments guys...

[Phantom M.C.]

first, its normal for people to view but not comment, because cards with at least decent effects will need people to use their brains, and lots of people are too lazy to do that.

 

for the cards, the monster option would probably be used only once, since recycle doesn't return monsters, unless you get a card effect that shuffles decks. water would be far more useful than fire. all three options for water will most likely help you. for fire, only the monster option would be useful imo, but again, its probably 1 use only.

 

oh, and for water, specify where you summon the monster from.

 

rating: 8/10 good cards for someone new.

[Arc-Reborn]

Thanks for the advice. Will change it soon.