Necromancers *****

[Inexplicable Madness]

So I'm gonna make a set but I want everything as balanced and good as I can get it so I'm going to do this one card at a time...

Please, if you're going to mark me for OCG, at least tell me how to fix it...

 

[spoiler=Necromancer - Lich King]

 

 

[spoiler=LORE]

 

When this card is destroyed by battle while in Attack Position, destroy 1 of your opponents' Attack Position monsters. If the selected card's ATK is 1000 or more, inflict the selected card's DEF as Direct Damage to your opponents' Life Points.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Necromancer - Apprentice]

 

 

[spoiler=LORE]

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by discarding 1 "Lich King". If this card is Summoned successfully, toss a coin, and call it. If you call it right destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed by battle during your opponent's Battle Phase by a monster with an ATK of 1000, inflict 200 Direct Damage to your opponent.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Necromancer - Destruction God]

 

 

[spoiler=LORE]

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 DARK Fiend-Type monsters from your control to the Graveyard. This card can only be activated in Defense Position. When a card you control is destroyed by a Fusion monster with an ATK of 1500 or higher send it to the Graveyard. In the next Standby Phase, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, inflict a monsters lowest ATK in your control as Direct Damage to your opponent. If the damage is 450 or lower, inflict a monsters highest DEF your opponent controls as Direct Damage to your opponent. Discard all face-up cards on your field and your current hand. Draw 5 cards.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Necromancer - Light Vanquisher]

 

 

[spoiler=LORE]

 

When this card is successfully Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Bladed Minion from your hand to the Groveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 "Necromancer - Dark Caster". If the card is summoned successfully, destroy all LIGHT monsters on your opponents side of the field.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Necromancer - Dark Caster]

 

 

[spoiler=LORE]

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by 1 "Necromancer - Light Vanquisher". When this card successfully attacks, increase DEF of 1 DARK monster by 200. When this card successfully defends, increase ATK of 1 DARK monster by 200. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict the number of LIGHT monsters on the field as Direct Damage to your oponent by 50.

 

 

 

 

 

[~Hado~]

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle in face-up attack-position, destroy 1 monster card in attack-position on your opponents side of the field. If the selected card's ATK is over 1000, inflict the selected card's DEF to your opponents Life Points.

Fixed to proper OCG: When this card is destroyed by battle while in face-up attack position, destroy 1 face-up attack position monster your opponent controls. If the selected monster has over 1000 ATK, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the selected monster's DEF.

Fixed to the best of my abilities.

6/10, cuz i think it's effect is OP'ed.

HOLY S**T, I SELECTED D.A.D.

[Archwing]

Well, Seems okay to me, Mabey underpowered. Either lower the level one or two stars or make the ATK a bit higher. 7/10

[Tricksy]

tHE OCG should read:

 

When this face-up Attack Position card is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy 1 Monster Card in Attack Position on your opponents side of the field. If the selected card's ATK is over 1000, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the selected monter's DEF.

 

Now, for the card. The name and picture are just wayyy too cool for it to have a common effet like this. The card should be better, or have a bit more ATK/DEF. There are already real cards that are only level 4 and have the same effect, such as man-eater bug or yomi ship. If you want to keep the Effect relatively the same for a level 6 monster, I'd make it so that when its destroyed, destroy the montser that killed it and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters ATK. but thats just my opinion. anyway, i like everything about it, escept the Effect and OCG, so I'll give it a 8/10.

 

Fixed to proper OCG: When this card is destroyed by battle while in face-up attack position, destroy 1 face-up attack position monster your opponent controls. If the selected monster has over 1000 ATK, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the selected monster's DEF.

Fixed to the best of my abilities.

6/10, cuz i think it's effect is OP'ed

 

 

no... sorry, your OCG is wrong too.

[Inexplicable Madness]

tHE OCG should read:

 

When this face-up Attack Position card is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy 1 Monster Card in Attack Position on your opponents side of the field. If the selected card's ATK is over 1000, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the selected monter's DEF.

 

Now, for the card. The name and picture are just wayyy too cool for it to have a common effet like this. The card should be better, or have a bit more ATK/DEF. There are already real cards that are only level 4 and have the same effect, such as man-eater bug or yomi ship. If you want to keep the Effect relatively the same for a level 6 monster, I'd make it so that when its destroyed, destroy the montser that killed it and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters ATK. but thats just my opinion. anyway, i like everything about it, escept the Effect and OCG, so I'll give it a 8/10.

 

 

 

 

no... sorry, your OCG is wrong too.

 

Alright thanks...one thing, in your ocg correction shouldn't "Monster Card" be "monster card" or am I missing something?

 

And btw...I'm not quite how I would correctly word your suggestion for the effect...any ideas?

[LiAM]

Official LiAM OCG fix:

When this card is destroyed by battle while in Attack Position, destroy 1 of your opponents' Attack Position monsters. If the selected card's ATK is 1000 or more, inflict the selected card's DEF as Direct Damage to your opponents' Life Points.

 

Best I could do.

 

Good image.

 

Make some more so we can all see the tactics ;D

 

8.3/10

[Inexplicable Madness]

Official LiAM OCG fix:

When this card is destroyed by battle while in Attack Position, destroy 1 of your opponents' Attack Position monsters. If the selected card's ATK is 1000 or more, inflict the selected card's DEF as Direct Damage to your opponents' Life Points.

 

Best I could do.

 

Good image.

 

Make some more so we can all see the tactics ;D

 

8.3/10

 

Ok thanks for the help

 

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PMUB

 

New Card Added: Necromancer - Apprentice

[~Hado~]

When this card is Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Lich King" from your hand to the Graveyard, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, destroy one face-up Defense Position monster on your opponents side of the field. If this card is destroyed in your opponents next Battle Phase, destroy the attacking card and send this card to the Graveyard. If this card is not, you may repeat the effect.

Okay, this should be better than last time;

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Spcial Summoned, except by sending 1 "Lich King" from your hand to your Graveyard. If this card is Summoned succesfully, toss a coin, and call Heads, or Tails. If you call it right, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed during your opponent's Battle Phase, destroy the attacking monster. (This part I don't get)

Your pic could improve, and the effect would be great, if this card had better ATK since that would make the whole card's power based on the effect. But its prety well balanced.

7/10.

[Inexplicable Madness]

Okay, this should be better than last time;

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Spcial Summoned, except by sending 1 "Lich King" from your hand to your Graveyard. If this card is Summoned succesfully, toss a coin, and call Heads, or Tails. If you call it right, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed during your opponent's Battle Phase, destroy the attacking monster. (This part I don't get)

 

Oh i see where i messed up...

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Spcial Summoned, except by sending 1 "Lich King" from your hand to your Graveyard. If this card is Summoned succesfully, toss a coin, and call it. If you call it right, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle during your opponent's Battle Phase by a monster with an attack of 1000, inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

 

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Hmm is that good or is there more needed corrections?

[~Hado~]

Oh i see where i messed up...

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Spcial Summoned, except by sending 1 "Lich King" from your hand to your Graveyard. If this card is Summoned succesfully, toss a coin, and call it. If you call it right, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle during your opponent's Battle Phase by a monster with an attack of 1000, inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

 

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Hmm is that good or is there more needed corrections?

That should do it. And now i can see your Necromancers are based on dishing out revenge on whoever killed 'em. Good job pissin off people! Now they have to technically pay to attack.

[Inexplicable Madness]

That should do it. And now i can see your Necromancers are based on dishing out revenge on whoever killed 'em. Good job pissin off people! Now they have to technically pay to attack.

 

Pissin' people off while I play is what I do best XD and yes that's the whole idea

[LiAM]

Oh i see where i messed up...

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Spcial Summoned, except by sending 1 "Lich King" from your hand to your Graveyard. If this card is Summoned succesfully, toss a coin, and call it. If you call it right, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle during your opponent's Battle Phase by a monster with an attack of 1000, inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

 

...

 

Hmm is that good or is there more needed corrections?

 

There are corrections to be made, here they are:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by sendingdiscarding 1 "Lich King" from your hand to your Graveyard. If this card is Summoned succesfully, toss a coin, and call it. If you call it right, destroy 1 face-up Defense Position monster on your opponent's side of the fieldyour opponent controls. If this card is destroyed as a result ofby battle during your opponent's Battle Phase by a monster with an attackATK of 1000, inflict 200 Direct damage to your opponent.

[~Hado~]

Damn I did it wrong again.... oops..

[Inexplicable Madness]

...Ah ok thanks LiAM lol I was hoping to have the OCG perfected before you did :D

[LiAM]

...Ah ok thanks LiAM lol I was hoping to have the OCG perfected before you did :D

 

;D I'm always here if you ever want an OCG fix.

[~Hado~]

...Ah ok thanks LiAM lol I was hoping to have the OCG perfected before you did :D

Meh, I'm srry, those mistakes were due to me thinking of the old OCG, and the ATK thing was me skimming your reply.

[Inexplicable Madness]

Meh, I'm srry, those mistakes were due to me thinking of the old OCG, and the ATK thing was me skimming your reply.

 

think nothing of it. I thought it was right except for the ATK lol

[Inexplicable Madness]

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New Card Added: Necromancer - Destruction God!

[Phantom M.C.]

the destruction god

 

This card can only be activated in Defense Position.

-you don't activate monsters, you activate their effects.

 

Discard all face-up cards on your field

-again, you don't discard cards on the field, thats a term for the hand only

 

some problems:

not a lot of people use fusion monsters

damage is 450 or lower, there's almost no chance of that happening.

you have to destroy all monsters on your field, and discard your entire hand. might be good or bad, but mostly likely bad.

[LiAM]

Another OCG fix, maybe with a few effect changes to make it work:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 DARK Fiend-Type monsters from your control to the Graveyard. This card can only be activated in Defense Position. When a card you control is destroyed by a Fusion monster with an ATK of 1500 or higher send it to the Graveyard. In the next Standby Phase, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, inflict a monsters lowest ATK in your control as Direct Damage to your opponent. If the damage is 450 or lower, inflict a monsters highest DEF your opponent controls as Direct Damage to your opponent. Discard all face-up cards on your field and your current hand. Draw 5 cards.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 DARK Fiend-Type monsters. This card's effect can only be activated while in Defense Position. When a card you control is destroyed by a Fusion monster with an ATK of 1500 or higher, send it to the Graveyard. In the next Standby Phase, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, inflict damage to your opponents' Life Points equal to the ATK of the lowest ATK monster you control. If the damage is 450 or lower, inflict damage to your opponents' Life Points equal to the DEF of the monster with the highest DEF. Tribute all face-up cards on your field and discard your hand. Draw 5 cards.

 

Might want to change the Fusion monster criteria to Synchro monster. It's more likely and considered modern.

[Inexplicable Madness]

True...Synchro will be added instead of Fusion

[Inexplicable Madness]

BUMP

[Demodude08]

The ironic thing is that the pic for THE LICH KING is of a NAXXRAMAS FROST WRAITH.

 

Both of which are wow characters from the same expansion pack.

 

Sorry, just had to comment.

[Inexplicable Madness]

um...ok didn't know that...I don't play wow...