Elemental Avatar - Yggdrasil

[Archwing]

Well i have been having bad luck finding pictures so i decided to look at the custom image archive. I found these on HP Dooms page and wow, The idea just kinda slammed me. Its not super original but i think its good. I know my OCG is not the best so i would REALLY like it if you could point out any OCG errors and tell me how to fix them. Also any input as to if its OPed or UPed is also welcome. Well this is the first one so i hope you like it.

LORE:This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field Increase the ATK and DEF of all Plant-type monsters by 500 points. When this card is summoned place 3 "Aether counters" on this card. Once per turn during your Battle Phase you can tribute 1 "Aether Counter" to negate the effects of your opponents spell and trap cards until the End phase of your turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you may send 5 spell cards from your deck Out of play to special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

[LiAM]

Not many OCG at first glance but:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all Plant-Type monsters by 500. Place 3 Aether Counters on this card when you Summon this card. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can remove 1 Aether Counter to negate the effects of your opponents' Spell and Trap Cards until the End phase of your turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can remove from play 5 Spell Cards from your Deck to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

 

Effect fixed, there were actually a few, mainly capitals, but also some wording.

 

Good pic ;D

 

Nice Card

 

8.4/10

[Archwing]

Not many OCG at first glance but:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all Plant-Type monsters by 500. Place 3 Aether Counters on this card when you Summon this card. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can remove 1 Aether Counter to negate the effects of your opponents' Spell and Trap Cards until the End phase of your turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can remove from play 5 Spell Cards from your Deck to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

 

Effect fixed, there were actually a few, mainly capitals, but also some wording.

 

Good pic ;D

 

Nice Card

Thank you. Im trying to get them as perfect as i can before i show them as a set so thanks a bunch.

[LiAM]

No problem mate.