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Daemonseed - Help with OCG wanted


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Well just like the other one i posted i need some help with the OCG of this card. Being that this one is similar to Yggdrasil i think i got most of the OCG right but im not 100% sure if i missed somthing. Help is VERY welcome. And the next cards in the set are the ones im gonna have the most problems with OCG with...

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LORE:This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field increase the ATK of all Pyro-Type monsters by 600. When this card is Summoned place 3 Aether counters on this card. Once per turn during your Battle Phase you can remove 1 Aether Counter to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle you can remove from play 5 Trap Cards from your Deck to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

 

BTW if there is a seprate section that helps fix OCG i would love a link or directions to it.

Once again ALL CREDIT FOR THE PICTURE GOES TO HP Doom

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Another fix mate:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field Increaseincrease the ATK of all Pyro-Type monsters by 600 points. When this card is summonedSummoned, place 3 Aether Counters on this card. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase you can Tributeremove 1 Aether Counter to increase the ATK of this card by 500 points until the End phase of your turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result ofby battle, you maycan remove from play 5 Trap Cards from your Deck to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

 

Quite a few errors, mainly the same ones you made in the other.

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Quite a few errors, mainly the same ones you made in the other.

Ah thanks I was looking between my old discription and your fixed one to try and find my common problems but with them crossed out i can see them now. Ill give you a rep for helping me with these two.

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Ah thanks I was looking between my old discription and your fixed one to try and find my common problems but with them crossed out i can see them now. Ill give you a rep for helping me with these two.

 

Thanks, and yeah crossing them out is hard for me to see which changes I've done with all the tags and stuff, but I find it helps the Card poster :)

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