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[Archwing]

Well im working on a set that i want to get the OCG perfect on so that people dont just post "The ogc is bad" and leave or somthing like that so i would really like some help with this. I know im REALLY bad with ocg and tend to make the same mistakes sevral times so bear with me. IF you could please give the following discriptions a OCG review and/or point out common mistakes i made. Well here it goes...

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field decrease the ATK and DEF of all LIGHT monsters by 300. When this card is Summoned place 3 Aether counters on this card. Once per turn during your Battle Phase you can remove 1 Aether Counter to Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each card in your opponents Graveyard until the End phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle you can remove from play 4 cards in your hand to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field Insect-Type monsters sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle return to the bottom of their owners deck. When this card is summoned place 3 Aether counters on this card. Once per turn during your Battle Phase you can remove 1 Aether Counter to decrease the ATK of this card by 800 points and attack your opponent directly until the End phase of your turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you may send 4 Insect-type monsters from your deck Out of play to special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field your opponent must pay 500 life points to Normal Summon monsters. When this card is Summoned place 3 Aether counters on this card. Once per turn during your Main Phase you can remove 1 Aether Counter to return 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle you can remove from play the bottom 5 cards on your Deck to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field increase the DEF of all Aqua-Type monsters by 400. When this card is Summoned place 3 Aether counters on this card. Once per turn during your opponents Battle Phase you can remove 1 Aether Counter to Increase the DEF of this card by 500 until the End phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle you can remove from play 7 Monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your Deck.

[Nishi-chan]

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the fieldDecrease the ATK and DEF of all LIGHT monsters on the field by 300. When this card is Summoned, place 3 Aether Counters on this cardit. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can remove 1 Aether Counter from this card to increase the ATK of this card by 100 points for each card in your opponent's Graveyard until the End Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyarddestroyed by battle you can remove from play 4 cards in your hand to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your deck.

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the field Insect-Type monsters sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle return to the bottom of their owner's deck instead of being sent to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned place 3 Aether counters on this cardit. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can remove 1 Aether Counter from this card toand decrease the ATK of this card by 800 points. If you do, this card can attack your opponent directly until the End Phase of your turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyarddestroyed as a result of battle you may sendremove from play 4 Insect-Type monsters from your deck Out of play to special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your deck.

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the fieldYour opponent must pay 500 life points to Normal Summon or Set monsters. When this card is Summoned place 3 Aether Counters on this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 Aether Counter from this card to return 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is sent to the Graveyarddestroyed by battle you can remove from play the bottom 5 cards on your deck to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your deck.

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a "Elemental Avatar". As long as this card remains face-up on the fieldIncrease the DEF of all Aqua-Type monsters on the field by 400. When this card is Summoned place 3 Aether Counters on this cardit. Once per turn, during your opponent's Battle Phase, you can remove 1 Aether Counter from this card to increase the DEF of this card by 500 points until the End Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard bydestroyed battle you can remove from play 7 monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Elemental Avatar" from your deck.

Not perfect, but the closest a 5-star member can get.

[Archwing]

Ah thanks ^_^

Ill give you a rep for all your work. As long as i can look at this it can be locked now.....Im not sure on this new interface if i even can change the title...

[Nishi-chan]

You can. And I fixed one thing I missed on there.

Your welcome =D