XXXX...the exiled zone...XXXXmuaahhhahahaha

[crocruler]

All monsters sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. When a monster is removed from play, Special Summon it in face-up Attack or Defense Position in the removed from play Zone.During each Battle Phase the turn player selects 1 or more monsters in face-up Attack Position in the removed from Zone to attack(Damage calculation is applied). Monsters destroyed in the removed from play zone are sent to the Graveyard. If either player has no monsters in their removed from play zone, that player takes Damage equal to the combined ATK of all the other player's face-up Attack Position monsters.

 

im not sure if the pic is suitable or the ocg is correct, but i think its really cool :P

[Smesh]

All monsters sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. When a monster is removed from play, Special Summon it in face-up Attack or Defense Position in the removed from play Zone.During each Battle Phase the turn player selects 1 or more monsters in face-up Attack Position in the removed from Zone to attack(Damage calculation is applied). Monsters destroyed in the removed from play zone are sent to the Graveyard. If either player has no monsters in their removed from play zone, that player takes Damage equal to the combined ATK of all the other player's face-up Attack Position monsters.

 

I like it. Minus the plentiful OCG errors, it's a creative card. 7/10

[crocruler]

thanks for corrections, i fixed it up now. bump XD

[crocruler]

bump

[A Flying Toaster]

yes, its very creative, like ismesh says...just need to fix the ocg mistakes.

4/5

[crocruler]

thank u. uhh i changed the card accorsing to ismesh' changes so is the ocg now rite?