Face McShooty Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 When this card is Special Summoned, you can add "Dale Earnhardt, Jr." from your Deck to your hand. When this card is added to your hand due to the effect of "Dale Earnhardt, The Intimidator", you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Remove from play 1 "Dale Earnhardt, The Intimidator" face-up on the field. Let me know if there's any OCG errors, i'm not good at OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 When this card is Special Summoned, you can add "Dale Earnhardt, Jr." from your Deck to your hand.On Dale Jr. you can just say "you can draw 1 card". The last part is not needed, but it's not wrong either. Oh, and there should be a full stop in the end. The pics are a little squashed and low quality. And remove the text from any pics you use. It doesn't look good with it on the picI rate your cards 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted August 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 last past? what do you mean?and by a full stop, you mean a period? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 Oh, a typo. I meant "last part". And I mean a full stop ".". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted August 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 ok, how are they now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 Hand should be lowercaseFor the new card I don't really see its usefulness The OCG is also off. Here is what it should look like: Remove from play 1 "Dale Earnhardt, The Intimidator" face-up on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted August 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 well its really of no use, i just made it to in memory of Dale Earnhardt R.I.P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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