Neo-MasterX Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 After a long time a comeback card from my Mystic Creatures has appear.Effect:FLIP: If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard after flipping, you can take control of 1 of your opponents face-up monsters. At your next 2nd Main Phase that monster is returned to your opponents hand and you take damage to your Life Points equal 1 Monster Attack Points in his/her hand. Credits for that cool pic to NickLD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoodat1994 Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 the grammars off and its a lil underpowered. and the effect is a bit confusing,, but overall,, good job :)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironcore Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 good card and well balanced since its def is low.you might want to change it so that you take damage equal to the card you took control of coz then your opponent might have to reveal a card in their hand.but overall 8/10.OCG:At your next 2nd Main Phase should be"During your next 2nd Main Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 I do believe an OCG correction is in order...It should say:If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard after it is flipped face up, you can take control of 1 of your opponent's face-up monsters. At the beginning of the second Main Phase after this effect's activation, that monster is returned to your opponent's hand and you take damage to your Life Points equal to half the ATK of one monster in your opponent's hand.(KEY: Bold=Corrections; Italic=Stuff I added to make it less UP'ed)Overall, pretty good. I think these corrections should help. If it isn't what you're lookin' for, I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 I do believe an OCG correction is in order...It should say:If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard after it is flipped face up, you can take control of 1 of your opponent's face-up monsters. At the beginning of the second Main Phase after this effect's activation, that monster is returned to your opponent's hand and you take damage to your Life Points equal to half the ATK of one monster in your opponent's hand.(KEY: Bold=Corrections; Italic=Stuff I added to make it less UP'ed)Overall, pretty good. I think these corrections should help. If it isn't what you're lookin' for, I'm sorry. about your last correction: you take damage to your Life Points equal to half the ATK of one monster in your opponent's hand.What if that card would be the white dragon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 You take 1500 points of Damage. Even if it is too much, it's better than taking 3000 points of Damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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