The newest card...

[::Roked::Bordum::]

This is my 1st card, enjoy

 

 

 

 

 

::Effect::

When this card is successfully summoned, you can increase the ATK of all FIRE Machine-Type monsters you control by 200. At the End Phase this effect is activated the affected monsters ATK is halved. If this card's effect is negated by a Spell or Trap card, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points and destroy this card.

 

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Hope you liked it!

[Phantom M.C.]

wow man, i'm very impressed. you are one of the 5% of the newbies that can make a good 1st card. did u read the tuturials or help sections?

 

9/10 cause its your first card.

 

here's a +rep for you for motivation

[CMRenji]

Very, very good pic. OCG(Official Card Grammar) has errors:

 

When this card is Summoned, increase the ATK of all FIRE Machine-type monsters you control by 200. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, the effected monsters' ATK is halved. If this card's effect is negated by a Spell or Trap Card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent and destroy this card.

 

A tad Underpowered in my opinion. Here is a less UP'd version:

 

When this card is Summoned, increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters you control by 500. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, the effected monsters' ATK is halved. If this card's effect is negated by a Spell or Trap Card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent and destroy this card.

 

Very nice for a new member. 9.3/10 Great Job!:)

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

Very good for a new timer, always good to see newbies that can hold there own on YCM

heres an ocg fix

When this card is successfully summoned, you can increase the ATK of all FIRE Machine-Type monsters you control by 200. During the End Phase after this effects activation the affected monsters ATK is halved. If this card's effect is negated by a Spell or Trap Card, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points and destroy this card.

 

9.4576823/10 cause this is a really good first card

[::Roked::Bordum::]

Thanks for the feedback and for some OCG fixes, also Galadrien I did not use any tutorials or guides, I just used my imagination and created it. ::I'll try to look into the OCG later::

[Phantom M.C.]

really? then why is your ocg so good for a 1st card?

[::Roked::Bordum::]

I don't really know... I have created cards on a slip of notebook paper before with the help of some cards to make them. So I know some of that w/e it is OCG stuff, and how to write it.