uzumakinaruto93 Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Any comments, rates, improvements, grammar fix all appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Some OCG errors but fairly good and balanced just lower stars to 4 then its great from me though its only 4.3/5.1:-D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Any comments' date=' rates, improvements, grammar fix all appreciated[/quote'] Card * ????? dont cap monster Level Its not good, the way you worded it means you have to discard 1 per turn, so if you had a good monster in your hand you were saving you would be forced to discard it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted January 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Some OCG errors but fairly good and balanced just lower stars to 4 then its great from me though its only 4.3/5.1:-D if that would be level 4 it would be way to strong * ????? times' date=' as in times 200 dont cap monster ok Its not good, the way you worded it means you have to discard 1 per turn, so if you had a good monster in your hand you were saving you would be forced to discard it. will be fixed fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 you write times as x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted January 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 you write times as x i knew there were something wrong with that thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 YIKES! If you discard a Level 10 monster, that monster will have 3900 ATK!! I would recommend making the ATK boost go by 100 instead of 200 to make it less overpowered. EDIT: I almost forgot; 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 pretty cool, i think theres a few errors, i just cant point 'em out, 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 pretty cool' date=' i think theres a few errors, i just cant point 'em out, 7.9/10[/quote']I think that's already been done so no loss for you there Kev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted January 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 YIKES! If you discard a Level 10 monster' date=' that monster will have 3900 ATK!! I would recommend making the ATK boost go by 100 instead of 200 to make it less overpowered. EDIT: I almost forgot; 7.8/10[/quote'] i think it would make it kinda underpowered..i mean discard a level 8 monster for 800 ATK for the rest of the turn?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 seems okayi like the pic4.35/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 It's ok, here:What DJ said XD7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Some OCG errors needs work 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krizdesigner Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 I absolutely LOVE this card! Sometimes I wish monsters would look a little less archaic and more retro...this one answers my wish! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 lol, well, now that your life is complete, kill yourself! lol, jk. Is that really what you want though??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Saboooom Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 lol' date=' well, now that your life is complete, kill yourself! lol, jk.[/quote'] I know you said JK, but that was kinda stupid. Anyways, really cool card. I can see some minor OCG problems that have already been pointed out by others, so, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 YIKES! If you discard a Level 10 monster' date=' that monster will have 3900 ATK!! I would recommend making the ATK boost go by 100 instead of 200 to make it less overpowered. EDIT: I almost forgot; 7.8/10[/quote'] i think it would make it kinda underpowered..i mean discard a level 8 monster for 800 ATK for the rest of the turn?? Well...........Maybe...........You're right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 lol' date=' well, now that your life is complete, kill yourself! lol, jk.[/quote'] I know you said JK, but that was kinda stupid. Anyways, really cool card. I can see some minor OCG problems that have already been pointed out by others, so, 8/10.Sry, I try to have fun. It can get boring here, so I try to put in some kind of fun ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Awesome pic. Needs a better name though. And I'm not sure, but shouldn't Monster be capped when it is immediately followed by Card?8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Awesome pic. Needs a better name though. And I'm not sure' date=' but shouldn't Monster be capped when it is immediately followed by Card?8/10.[/quote'] not sure...DJ told me not so i didn't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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