Here it is: My first card!

[!Golden_Coinz!]

Hello everyone! I'm here to present...MY FIRST CARD!...I hope it is good and you all will like it. (Comments and Ratings appreciated)

 

 

Effect:

If this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can select one Level 4 or lower FIRE monster you control and 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster your opponent controls and switch control of the selected monsters. After 3 turns, the selected card(s) are then returned to the respective owners Deck. Each players deck is then shuffled.

 

 

~Card has been edited. Thanks to Lovely CC.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Welcome to YCM! Now lets see your card. To start off, the effect can be somewhat worthless. Purely because it's specific and your opponent's monster also has to be a FIRE Attribute monster as well, making this possibly best for a Side-Deck for Flamvells. Then, after 3 turns, both monsters return to the player's original Decks, no matter if those 2 monsters were in the hand, field, Graveyard or remove from play zone, (I'm guessing) which is great for recycling and for a re-shuffle that can always be nice. Overall, IMO, you should change it so that the opponent's selected monster has to be a FIRE Attribute. Great card for a new member, you have lots of potential. 9.4/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Hmm...Well first off yes, welcome ^^.

 

This card is to situational for my taste. Indeed plenty of people are running Flamvells or atleast certain Flamvells but thats not enough. As Anbu said, best side decked to Flamvells. Although I see a possible connection between the proper DNA card and this card. However, there is a critical error in your OCG that makes this card OP.

 

The way your effect is written there is only 1 card being selected, your monster. Therefore, when the 3 turns is up the only card being returned is your own monster from your opponents field while you keep the monster you switched with your opponent. That means if you activate DNA Transplant, select FIRE, switch this card for your opponent's Stardust Dragon, when your 3 turns are up, this monster returns to your Deck while you keep your opponent's Stardust.

 

This makes this card very OP.

 

Then of course there is the fact that the way it is written this card returns from ANYWHERE to your Deck making it very hard to dispose of.

 

 

Overall, it's very OP although I feel you didn't mean to make it so I get what you ment but the way you worded it made it wonky.

 

And yes its very good for a first

 

 

Edit: Wow i feel stupid now im talking about it being OP because it can take SDD but duh! SDD is lvl 8 and this only takes lvl 4 ><.... stupid me... but still the idea stands >>

[!Golden_Coinz!]

Thanks for the help people. I agree that I was rushing to get it done, so it's effect does look Op, but I didn't want it to. It was just the way I worded it. :D

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Well i could word it the way i think you wanted it o.o

 

is this it?

 

"If this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can select one Level 4 or lower FIRE monster you control and 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster your opponent controls amd switch control of the selected monsters. After 3 turns, the selected card(s) are then returned to the respective owners Deck. Each players deck is then shuffled."

 

That way both monsters are selected and affected by the last effect.

[!Golden_Coinz!]

Yes, thanks for the rewording I'll go edit it now.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Well now i agree w/ Anbu :3