narutoman723 Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 tell me what you think! All Opinions are welcome! Some don't have OCG but please, you get the basic idea. This is more of a preview...ish rough_draft....ish thing.....but ALL opinions are welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 oooooooooo you did something quite bad it should be Warrior / Mystic / effect for it to be realistic. Some grammar, OCG and pictures errors. Nice unique idea but you need to fix the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoman723 Posted January 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 okay i'll do that...now..... thanks for the post =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoman723 Posted January 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 okay maybe later that's gonna take too long. I have to get ready for a tournament at 1:00. i know thats a few hours away but still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Your welcome ^_^ and its the first time ive seen dwarfs ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoman723 Posted January 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 once again people please post!!! i want your opinions!!! They're important!!! otherwise how would i know if they were horrible or not?!?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 eh, there alright...the normal monsters has no descriptions, but there alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Normal monsters need text, the Effect monsters have several grammar problems, oaky pics, some are overpowered. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 look good but there are a few grammar errors that need to be fixedotherwise, they're pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 few OCG errors but good foraurotoman:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Briton of Rose Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 7.5/10 - OCG, some slight overpower, and where in the name of God Kaiba is the "Dwarf Tossing" card? (Suggestion - Continuous Spell/"Send one 'Dwarven' monster you control to the Graveyard. Inflict 700 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points.") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zachary132 Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 Dwarven survivor and Dwarven triumph have the same effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 DWARFS!! DWARFS!! DWARFS!! (What Dwarfs are fun to use in combat) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 12, 2008 Report Share Posted January 12, 2008 There are a TON of problems there, and you didn't even write anything on the normal monsters >_<3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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