The Zodiac

[Yusuf Alaseeri]

[spoiler=Monsters][spoiler=The Zodiac - Aries]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. As long as this card remains face-up on your field, your opponent cannot select another "Zodiac" monster as an attack target.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Taurus]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. A monster that this card destroys by battle has its effect negated.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Gemini]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "Zodiac" monster you control to return 1 face-down trap or spell card to its owner's hand.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Cancer]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. If you control 2 or more face-up "Zodiac" monsters, you can special summon this card.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Leo]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. This card cannot be special summoned. You can tribute this card to destroy up to 2 face-down trap or spell cards on the field.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Virgo]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Libra]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. This card cannot be special summoned. You can tribute this card to add 1 "Zodiac" monster from your deck to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Scorpio]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 face-up "Zodiac" monster your control to draw 1 card.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Sagittarius]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. When this card is summoned, draw 1 card.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Capricorn]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. When this card is attacking, it gains 300 ATK

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Aquarius]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. Once per turn, you can add 300 points to your Life Points for each face-up "Zodiac" monster you control.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac - Pisces]

This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up "Zodiac" monster you control other than this card. When this face-up card is returned from your field to your deck, your opponent picks 1 card from your hand randomly, if it is a "Zodiac" monster that can be special summoned, special summon it with it's effect negated, if not, move the card to your opponent's hand.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spells][spoiler=The Zodiac Universe]

All face-up "Zodiac" monsters your control gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can send the top card of your deck to the graveyard to add 1 "Zodiac" monster from your graveyard to your hand.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac Supernova]

As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, "Zodiac" monsters have their effect negated.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac Black Hole]

You cannot activate this card on the same turn you activated "The Zodiac Supernova". When this card is activated, destroy 1 face-up "The Zodiac Supernova" on the field and activate 1 "The Zodiac Blinking Pulsar" from your deck.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac Blinking Pulsar]

This card can only be activated by the effect of "The Zodiac Black Hole". Once per turn, you can increase 1 "Zodiac" monster ATK by 1000 for every other "Zodiac" monster you control until the End Phase. Only the selected monster can attack.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Traps][spoiler=The Zodiac Baby Star]

Special Summon 1 "Zodiac" monster from your graveyard, it cannot attack this turn.

 

 

[spoiler=The Zodiac Old Star]

Once per turn, remove from play 1 face-up "Zodiac" monster you control until the end phase. This effect can be activated during your opponent's turn.

 

 

 

Constructive Criticism & OCG Correction Appreciated.

 

All Pictures are by KAGAYA.

[Yusuf Alaseeri]

Someone comment and give me feedback, please.

[Yusuf Alaseeri]

Bump...

[Yusuf Alaseeri]

Bump again...

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

I guess ppl can be ignorant sometimes.

 

Anyways, here's what I think

 

Pics: 8/10 Seems fine to me overall, nothing overly mind blowing but fits perfectly with the cards

 

Template: 8/10 Normal Template

 

OCG: 8.5/10 Seems alright, just some slight mistakes

 

Originality/Creativity: 6.5/10 I've seen similar sets, still fine

 

Playability: 7/10 Could see some if it were real but idk

 

Overall: 38/50 Cool B)

[Yusuf Alaseeri]

Finally, someone commented!

 

Thanks for the feedback, I made these cards out of boredom so I wasn't really putting a lot of thought into them :P

 

EDIT: How do I get this moved to the Finished Sets? I'm not making any more cards to add into this.

[Yusuf Alaseeri]

Bump.

[Sweetie Belle]

Oh. My. God. I totally had this idea first! Check the Spoiler in my sig.

 

Anyways, I will copy FTW's rating system, just this once.

 

Pic: 5/10 There is a logo in the corner of each of your Signs

Template: 8/10

OCG: 7/10 Minor mistakes, mostly involves using old OCG

Originality/Creativity: 4/10 I definitely had this idea before you.

Playability: 6/10 They need a boss monster, IMO

Total: 30/50

[Yusuf Alaseeri]

Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on all the points you made, and as I said before, I wasn't putting my all into these cards. I'm new here so I didn't really notice your set or know about it.