vincent2ice Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Some capitalization errors... and the effect could be reworded. Cool picture, but you still could improve. Good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 nice but some errors1.capitalization2.Then is in one sentence (exmple)The targeted card gains 500 ATK and then loses 100 each turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Hm . .I know that this is a good card when I saw the thread's name.This card are quite good. . :38/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 good job 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Card 1 opponent's Graveyard Pyro-Type Card 2 Needs a background Picture looks stretched Personally i think its underpowered, your opponent gains 1000 Life Points, you cannot Special Summon it, also you cannot switch it to Def and you have to pay 1000 for 1 card.. Try and improve your mistakes ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Good pic, a little overpowered. Grammar problem, capitalize graveyard. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 seems good but there are a few grammar errors4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 some OCG, OCC errors goodish pic alrightish effect 6.5/10:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAJ Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 cool card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Nice. Good Pic, little overpowered, but good, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 graveyard needs to be capitalized like Graveyard.Nice Job 8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 14, 2008 Report Share Posted January 14, 2008 8/10.....Just some probs, not alot ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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