Angelic Dragon -- Serious OCG help needed.

[Lil' Foxy]

 

1 Angelic Dragon Synchron + 1 or more non-tuner monsters

This monster gains 500 attack and defense points per "angel" or "angelic" monster in your grave.

if this monsters attack is between 0 and 1000 it cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.

If this monsters attack is between 1100 and 1800 it can attack opponents life points directly.

if this monsters attack is 1900 or higher all spell and trap effects are negated.

 

please give me some feedback and critiques

 

SOMEBODY GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK!

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OCG FIX:

 

Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500 for every "Angel" or "Angelic" monster in your Graveyard. When this card's ATK is between 0 and 1000, it cannot be destroyed in battle. When this card's ATK is between 1100 and 1800, it can attack your opponent's life points directly. When this card's ATK is 1900 or more, the effect of all Spell and Traps cards are negated.

 

SUGGESTION: For the 2nd effect, say between 1100 and 2000, same as the 3rd; 2100 or more. The Idea is good, but that pic is WAAAAAAY too used by other users.

 

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