Kryuzei Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Created 1 new card . . .>w<Plz rate it. .It's been a while since I created a card. . lol. I think there's some error in the effect. . 'this card' should be 'Destroy 1 monster on the field' right ? 0.o; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 i like itAnd i love the picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Created 1 new card . . .>w<Plz rate it. .It's been a while since I created a card. . lol. I think there's some error in the effect. . 'this card' should be 'Destroy 1 monster on the field' right ? 0.o; Monsters not cards on your field gains not has declares OR?? dont cap Draw Deck OR??? Effect has OCG errors they also need correcting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 osiris do u do that 2 every1 lol it's nic to help though keep it up but not 2 much it'l get anoying. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 You have to yugioh master, its the only way ppl get to see and learn from their mistakes ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Agreed. .I rly don't mind about that. Yeah, I know there's some mistake, but it's the first time I make this kind of effect..Lol. thx osirisOR?? dont cap Draw Deck OR???Except this. .I cap draw because there's a '.' . .Which I think it's kinda. .Wrong. I dunno >.<I think OR is an OCG. .Like the one in Chaos monster. . Or is it wrong ? 0.o;So, what should I put for that effect ? But damn. . I haven't saved this card. . Guess I should make it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 not bad really good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Agreed. .I rly don't mind about that. Yeah' date=' I know there's some mistake, but it's the first time I make this kind of effect..Lol. thx osirisOR?? dont cap Draw Deck OR???Except this. .I cap draw because there's a '.' . .Which I think it's kinda. .Wrong. I dunno >.<I think OR is an OCG. .Like the one in Chaos monster. . Or is it wrong ? 0.o;So, what should I put for that effect ? But damn. . I haven't saved this card. . Guess I should make it again. Draw with a cap D is a grammar error, you dont cap draw unless its the start of a new sentence, as im checking out all my owned cards now and none have a cap D for draw. also you wrote OR in caps, when it should not be in caps, thus thats why i said OR?? as i didnt understand why you capped it, as ive never seen a card with a capped OR be4. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 also you wrote OR in caps, when it should not be in caps, thus thats why i said OR?? as i didnt understand why you capped it, as ive never seen a card with a capped OR be4.Damn fake cards. .>_>; I've seen that on a fake card. After cheking on wiki. .Guess it's wrong then.Okay, make some errata on it. Anymore mistake ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Does that say tributin, with no G? type has a cap T, so Type personally i would say .. Monster, Spell or Trap Card Fix those and its perfecto ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Thx ;3 Going to edit it now. .Shimatta 0.o; I forgot the 'g' . .There ? Is this fine ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Grammar and OCG is fine now ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Great. .Now I'll put it at the first post. .:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 hey, pretty cool, good job 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 thats so cool 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imadjinn Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Actually, the Union monsters have OR in their card text. :p Decent card, stats, effect, nice image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 i like pic 8/10:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Good pic, a little overpowered. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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