Code Y.C.M Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 if u know my darkness angel / archangel set u would know the first card. Baron sounded like a cool demon name 2 me so i made him transform into demon type cards check em outtransforms to-\/transforms to-\/if u cannot read the effects this is it:this monster can only be summoned by removing 4 lv.7 or higher fiend type monstrers on your side of the field from play and sacrifice a "baron - ultimate demon form" from your side of the field to the graveyard.while this monster is on your side of the field you can choose one of these effects during your main phase:1. your opponent cannot activate any spell or trap cards until the end of his'her next turn.2. choose one of your opponents monsters and decrease it's atk and def points by 3000.3. discard your hand to gain 2000 life-points. this is one new card i made not long ago i like it!! i hope u doi know there r no capitals i could not be bothered to do it i'll do it later ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 if u know my darkness angel / archangel set u would know the first card. Baron sounded like a cool demon name 2 me so i made him transform into demon type cards check em outtransforms to-\/transforms to-\/if u cannot read the effects this is it:this monster can only be summoned by removing 4 lv.7 or higher fiend type monstrers on your side of the field from play and sacrifice a "baron - ultimate demon form" from your side of the field to the graveyard.while this monster is on your side of the field you can choose one of these effects during your main phase:1. your opponent cannot activate any spell or trap cards until the end of his'her next turn.2. choose one of your opponents monsters and decrease it's atk and def points by 3000.3. discard your hand to gain 2000 life-points. this is one new card i made not long ago i like it!! i hope u doi know there r no capitals i could not be bothered to do it i'll do it later ok Card 1 Need to use caps in your card title When Graveyard Life Points 'inflict 1000 points of damage to both players Life Points', is how it should be worded. Underpowered and not very playable Card 2 Caps in title Overpowered sorta state what summon Tributing not sacri.. Fiend Card 3 Caps it title This State the summon type Level Fiend-Type Tributing Graveyard Main Phase Spell or Trap Cards his/her ATK, DEF Life Points Card 4 Caps in title On Special Summon turns If Life Points Many OCG errors They are all the corrections of your errors ^^^ Please correct your errors and remember then for next time ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 is there some1 who actually like these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 I like them ^_^ just the errors need corrected ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 there are a few errors but these arent bad good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 quite good just ifix the erros. one you fixed the errors i will give you a 9/10 but till then 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 They are fine, just listen to Dj. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 OCG errors (lots but who's complaining), No capitals in the names...6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.