Skinee's first card.

[.Skinee]

This is mah first card and I need a lot of FB for it so i can change it to standards of the game's grammar.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Effect::

Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Beast-Type monster with "Gold" in it's card name. The Special Summoned is treated as an Equip-Spell card and the card's DEF is then added to this card's DEF. At the End Phase of every turn, after this card's activation, you must pay 500 Life Points to keep the equipped card on the field. If you don't, the equipped card is removed from play and this card's DEF returns to 0.

 

 

B)

[zzuxon]

WAY under powered. You should remove the cost to keep the equipped gold monster.

[-Athena-]

Cool card ^_^

This is awesome for a first card :)

Keep it up.

I spot some OCG errors (I'm not good at fixing it) but since you're new, it's no problem.

Nice picture, it matched the name which matched the effect.

I would say it's balance but then this cost way too much to to get the DEF on the card.

 

But besides that, 9/10!

Great job.

 

*gives out a rep*

[.Skinee]

well, really i put 1000 cost becuase, the Gold monsters set im working on the monsters have great DEF power and one of my lvl 7 cards is 2900 and so some of my lvl 4 cards have 2100 DEF so it makes more life points to give greater power levels of DEF. ;)

 

B)

[Limited Edition KING]

 

Image & name flows nicely here.

 

Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Beast-Type monster with "Gold" in it's card name.

 

Well, I'll wait till I see some Beast "Gold" monsters before I really determine if this is overpowered, underpowered or balanced. At the moment it's balanced because it has a cost to Special Summon a monster and the monster must be a Beast "Gold" monster. This balance could change depending on what the other monsters effects are.

 

The Special Summoned is treated as an Equip-Spell card and the card's DEF is then added to this card's DEF.

 

So basically when you Special Summon a monster with this cards effect it then becomes an Equip Spell?

 

At the End Phase of every turn, after this card's activation, you must pay 500 Life Points to keep the equipped card on the field.

If you don't, the equipped card is removed from play and this card's DEF returns to 0.

 

I don't like the Life Point cost here, because you already have paid 1000 Points to Special Summon the monster first then add another 500 to keep it. I'd suggest either lowering the cost or removing the cost and replace it with another effect.

 

Overall, its a good first card I hardly see any Card Grammar errors and you have great Image/Name flow. There are somethings I don't understand about the effect or I think I understand but I need you to clarify somethings for me. Any I'll rate this card a B keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more cards from you.

 

King out. B)