Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Dj-Osiris is right about one thing; I did start this thread with the intent asking others for there opinions and taking those advices into consideration. And to be honest, I never went through with it. The only one to blame is myself. Therefore, I have reconstructed the card. And this time around, I will take the full force of your criticism, without objection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Wheres its ATK, DEF, EFFECT?? Dont post cards here unless they are finished, otherwise theres nothing to rate and the thread will turn spammy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 not very good plain and shouldn't be monster + ??? name it and add attack and defense goiod pic and name though 4/10:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 >_<+ The reason I needed help with the card is because it's incomplete. The last time I needed help with a Fusion Monster, nobody even brought that up. Once I decide on the second Material Monster, then I'll finish the rest. And the reason I put "?" is to emphasis this. but thank you, God Kaiba, for commenting on the picture and name. Here's the previous thread I had, by the way:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=21938 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Personally you should just ask members via PM, not create a thread asking members for advice within the realistic card section. Nice picture too and can you not make cards by yourself? Why would you need help? use your own thoughts, it has a better outcome that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e-hero sparky Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 How bout "Man Eating Black Shark"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e-hero sparky Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 How bout "Man Eating Black Shark"? Atk:2500 Def:1800 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 How bout "Man Eating Black Shark"? Atk:2500 Def:1800 No double posting. I might consider it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Why dont you just create an effect monster with it, whys it have to be a fusion? You could give it an effect like harpie queen and captain gold. or simply make it a lv6 that can only be special summoned by offering a great white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 I'm not going to help you with this except for one thing: The second fusion material should be a human like monster but the monster you pick should fit in a deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Alright, I'm done making the card. No further suggestions for Material Monsters needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Alright' date=' for now, this is how the card will be: [img']http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c175/KingdomHeartsKeeper/sharkpngset1set2typeFishdescription.jpg[/img] "Great White" + "Great White"A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for every Fish-Type Monster on your side of the field, except for this card. When this card destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you may Tribute 3 Fish-Type Monsters on your side of the field to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Now you guys can critique it as normal. ITS CRAP who would put 2 x great white in their deck... and who would tribute 3 monsters to bring it back...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Alright' date=' for now, this is how the card will be: [img']http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c175/KingdomHeartsKeeper/sharkpngset1set2typeFishdescription.jpg[/img] "Great White" + "Great White"A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for every Fish-Type Monster on your side of the field, except for this card. When this card destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you may Tribute 3 Fish-Type Monsters on your side of the field to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Now you guys can critique it as normal. ITS CRAP who would put 2 x great white in their deck... and who would tribute 3 monsters to bring it back...... That's it. I would have handled taking the critique into consideration and making it somewhat better. But for you to go in my face and say in all caps that the card is crap, that is an insult. If you had said it like, "the card's effect is not that good, and the Fusion requirements need adjusting", I would have taken it better. Be a little more considerate about what you say and how you say it to people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Its a really bad card, and tell me why the hell would anybody put X2 great whites in there deck? Well a i rate it a well deserved, 4/10 the effect needs some 'Consideration' as i, for one, would not tribute 3 monsters to bring it back.BTW, why is this a fish-type monster and how does have any similaritys to Great white? If you know what i meen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Its a really bad card' date=' nad tell me why the hell would anybody put X2 great whites in there deck? Well a i rate it a well deserved, 4/10[/quote'] Now that's somewhat better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Well im sorry But you asked for us to give you advice you took none of it then made your card yourself and its completely not good You posted this thread to ask for peoples advice Why didnt you take it??? ALORD's advice was spot on, but you didnt use it. And thats my opinion, if you post your card im allowed to express my views. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 i dont see how it's that badthere arent any grammar errors i can find and the image looks cool so good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 there r no fish type mosters any way so 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 uh, i think there are.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 i dont see how it's that badthere arent any grammar errors i can find and the image looks cool so good job Instinct its the overall play of the card which is not good. When was the last time anyone used great white, especially 2 of them and loads of fish monsters. and who would kill 3 monsters to bring it back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 i thinks thats cool9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Well im sorry But you asked for us to give you advice you took none of it then made your card yourself and its completely not good You posted this thread to ask for peoples advice Why didnt you take it??? ALORD's advice was spot on' date=' but you didnt use it. And thats my opinion, if you post your card im allowed to express my views.[/quote'] I tried to take ALORD's advice, but... I couldn't find an appropriate card that people would actually use (my thought was to use The Furious Sea King, but...). And how in the world would Neo-Spacian Aqua Dolphin fit in with the fact that the Fusion Monster is a shark? In all, I feel that I should apologize to ALORD for not taking his advice, or at least explaining before why I didn't. And... I think until I get things straightened out, I'll drop this idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 I dont understand why it has to be a fusion anyway. As i said, you could make it an effect monster that is summoned by offering great white. much like Neo bubbleman, archlord zerato or even vampire genesis etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Dj-Osiris is right about one thing; I did start this thread with the intent asking others for there opinions and taking those advices into consideration. And to be honest, I never went through with it. The only one to blame is myself. Therefore, I have reconstructed the card. And this time around, I will take the full force of your criticism, without objection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 NOW Its perfecto in playable terms ^_^ It makes more sense, more playable, especially with 2 tributes instead of 3, and WATER is better also ^_^ Now its good ^_^ I dont think Monsters, after WATER, need to have a cap M, as im looking at my luster envoy and it says 'DARK monster' OCG maybe off also tho, but playability is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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