SDM-89 Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 Hailstone Dragon There can only be 1 face-up "Hailstone Dragon" monster on the field.When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. this card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect. Inferno Force Eruloun There can only be 1 face-up "Inferno Force Eruloun" monster on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 200. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). When this card is removed from the field by a card effect, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck or graveyard. Eclipse Dragon Aranonth There can only be 1 face-up "Eclipse Dragon Aranonth" monster on the field. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 300. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). When this card is Normal Summoned, you can destroy a number of Spell or Trap Cards your opponent controls equal to the number of face-up Dragon-Type monsters you control. Dragons Lair When a Dragon-Type monster you control attacks, you can change the attack target's battle position. When this face-up card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or higher Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. (Expect Fusion and Synchro type monsters) Vulcanro Dragon 1 Eclipse Dragon Aranonth + Inferno Force ErulounOnce per turn Special Summon 1 "Dragon Token" (Dragon-Type/DARK/Level 1 /ATK 0/DEF 0) on your opponents side of the field. The "Dragon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon and they can not be destroyed by battle. Vulcanro Dragon increases its ATK by 200 for every Dragon Token on your opponents field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, Dragon Tokens are destroyed and your opponent losses 300 life points for every Dragon Token. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Board Box Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 Combined and Fixed the first two sentences:"Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls." Also, I would make this a Level 6 (or 7). Other than that, it's fairly balanced. 8.7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDM-89 Posted August 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 Thanks for the feedback I edit the first two sentences of its effect based on what you gave me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDM-89 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Bump - With a brand new Dragon - a new one will be put up in the morning along with a spell card. Enjoy XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masamune15 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 wow....that's fantastic tuner....hmmm, where is the synchro card related to that tuner? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDM-89 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 wow....that's fantastic tuner....hmmm, where is the synchro card related to that tuner? Im building it now XD and thanks for the compliment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 I'm gonna save my usual rating for later. I just need to get a couple of points in and then after revision I'll rate. Your first card is OP'd beyond belief. It is literally a walking, practically unstoppable Lightning Vortex. The only partially balancing thing is when you attack, it switches to defense, which is good...but if I played it, I wouldn't bother with an attack if that would happen. I would rewrite it so that after that effect activates it gets switched to defense mode. As for the second, I like it. It reminds me a lot of Fortune Fairies. Other than that, I think these are well made cards and the OCG is from what I saw spot on. Just revise the first and you're fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crossader Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 The 1st one is somewhat OP'd and balanced... since you can use a lightning vortex but it switches to def position when attacks, thats sort of balance. The 2nd one is monstruously OP'd with his last effect... "...When this card is removed from the field by a card effect, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Deck or graveyard" This means you can Special Summon ANY dragon from either your deck or your graveyard... how about if you Special Summon another one of this guys? or even when he is used as a Synchro material... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDM-89 Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 I changed the first effect and balanced the second one out. Hope you like and enjoy. XD The images sorta glitched and duplicated just fixed them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDM-89 Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Brought in a Field Card. Hope you like. The synchro will be up later on today maybe by noon Central time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDM-89 Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Heres the Synchro enjoy XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDM-89 Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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