barsam Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Whats up dog?[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Nicely thought out i like it, nice pic and effect they are a couple minor errors though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Whats up dog?[ on not in monster not Monster is at? opponent's OCG is off, many grammar errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Nice Pic!Cool Idea7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krizdesigner Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 You need to put a space in between the first and second sentences. Other than that, nice card! The pic actually reminds me of Guardian Baou (an actual card). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Grammar problems, on not in, on not at, good pic, a little overpowered. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Meh, grammar problems and such, oh yeah, and "DULLEST NAME EVER". :roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted January 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Ty all!@!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 well, the ocg could be a bit betteri guess its okay.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Grammar needs help, but ok.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jak35 Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 some OCG problums really cool picture 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 13, 2008 Report Share Posted January 13, 2008 Nice pic but OCG needs workage...7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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