♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 My first card ever was "Undead Dragon, Dweller of the Cave". Rate and comment please. Enjoy :) Partner:XSilent.ShadowsX +Rep him if you like his cards :) [spoiler=Undead Synchro Monsters (Bosses)][spoiler=Shadow Reaper of Death]1 Zombie-Type Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can Tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster you control to Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard. If this effect is used, this card cannot declare an attack during the turn this effect was used. When this card destroys a monster that your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed, destroy all Zombie-Type monsters that you control. [spoiler=Warlock of the Undead Army]1 Zombie-Type Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Successfully Summon, increase the ATK of all Zombie-Type monsters you control by 300 (excluding this card). This card gains 100 ATK for each Zombie-Type monster you control. When this card destroys a monster that your opponent controls, increase this card's DEF by 500. When this card is destroyed, select 1 opposing monster and decrease it's ATK and DEF by this card's DEF. [spoiler=Master of the Dead]1 "Undead" Tuner + 3 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Successfully Summoned, send all Zombie-Type monsters on the field to your Graveyard (excluding this card). This card gains 300 ATK and 100 DEF for each Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard. When this card destroys an opposing non-Zombie-Type monster, send the destroyed monster to your Graveyard and treat it as a Zombie-Type monster. [spoiler=Undead Dragons][spoiler=Hellraiser]This card cannot be Special Summoned. Increase this card's ATK by 300 for each " Undead " monster in your Graveyard. This card loses 500 ATK after each of your Standby Phases. When this cards ATK reaches 0, the controller loses 2000 Lifepoints. [spoiler=Toxic Tyrant]This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 2 Zombie-Type monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster that your opponent controls, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x100. When this card has destroyed 3 monsters, you can Tribute this card to inflict 800 damage to your opponent. [spoiler=Dweller of the Cave]This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard, you can destroy 1 monster and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200, this monster's Level is reduced by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, it is removed from play. [spoiler=Undead Dinosaurs][spoiler=Demon T-Rex]This card can only be Normal Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard. During your Battle Phase, you can Tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster to increase the ATK of this card by 400 until the end of your opponent's next Battle Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, inflict an additional x200 for each Zombie-Type monster you control (excluding this card). [spoiler=Undead Zombies][spoiler=Rotten Onion]If this card is used to Synchro Summon a monster, the Synchro Monster cannot be destroyed for the next 2 turns it was Summoned. [spoiler=Artic Beast]When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy 2 monsters you control and inflict damage equal to halve of both monster's DEF added together. When this card is destroyed by a Trap Card, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your hand. [spoiler=An American Hero]During your Standby Phase, this cardd can be Special Summoned from your Graveyard if you control a Warrior-Type monster. If this card is Special Summoned this way, Tribute 1 Warrior-Type monster you control and increase the ATK of this card by half of the Tributed monster's DEF. [spoiler=Nazi Steam Punk]Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's Side of the field. If the destroyed card was a Spell Card, increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the end of your opponent's next Battle Phase. If this card uses this effect, this card cannot attack during the turn the effect was used. [spoiler=Double Blade Killer]If you control another Zombie-Type monster besides "Undead Ninja, Double Blade Killer", this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster, increase this card's ATK by 300. When this card is destroyed while in Defense Position, inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's DEF. [spoiler=The Sneaky Thief]Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, select 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field and add the selected card to your hand. If this effect is used, this card cannot declare an attack during the turn this effect was activated. [spoiler=The Mistress]This card can be Special Summoned from your hand if you control 1 "Undead" monster. If this card is Special Summoned this way, add 1 Spell or Trap Card to your hand from your Deck (your Deck is then shuffled). If you use the Spell or Trap Card moved by this card's effect during the turn you activated this card's effect, send this card to the Graveyard. [spoiler=The Forgotten Knight]During the turn this card was Successfully Summoned, you can pay 300 Life Points to treat this card as a Warrior-Type monster also. When this card attacks, increase this card's ATK by 100 for each Zombie-Type monster you control. When this card destroys a monster, increase the ATK of 1 Zombie-Type monster you control by 200 (this card can not be chosen for the ATK increase). [spoiler=Lonesome Hunter]During your Battle Phase, you can Tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster you control to inflict 700 damage to your opponent. If this effect is used, this card cannot attack during the turn the effect was used. When this card inflicts a total of 2000 Damage or more to your opponent, increase the ATK of this card by 1000 and this card's effect cannot be used no more. [spoiler=Crazed With Dark Magic]This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 Spell or Trap Cards on your side of the field. When this card is Successfully Summoned, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field and inflict damage to your opponent for each Spell or Trap Card destroyed by this card's effect x500. This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards. [spoiler=Flesh Eater]After controlling this card for 2 turns, you can Tribute this card during your Standby Phase to destroy 1 opposing monster and Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard. [spoiler=Halloween Queen]As long as you control another Zombie-Type monster, this card cannot be targeted by an attack. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, decrease your opponent's Life Points by 100 for each card on his/her side of the field. [spoiler=Head Shooter]During your Battle Phase, you can Tribute 1 Zombie-Type monster you control to destroy 1 opposing monster. If this effect is used, this card cannot declare an attack during the turn the effect was used. +Rep me please, i'd really appreciate it ;) Set Goals: Reps-5*10 Posts-50 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 You could reduce the 5 monster Tribute to just 3. As it has the stats of a weak LV6. Maybe limit the Zombie/Fiend limit to just one Type. The first part of the effect is good, but the last part looks wrong. This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-Type or Fiend-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-Type or Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard, you can destroy 1 monster and inflict damage your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200, this monster's Level is reduced by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, it is removed from play. Well tbh, I'm not sure on the wording of the reduce Level by 1, but that's what I remember from some Tuners. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Not bad for a beginner your OCG is a lil messed up but i don't really care about that.however i will give a fix to help you on your way ;) This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-type or Fiend-type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-type or Fiend-type monster from your Graveyard, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and inflict 200 Damage to your opponent times the level of the destroyed monster. If this effect is used, decrease the Level of this monster by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, remove this card from play. The effect is cool and its balanced, hell i may even play it so8.3563/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Not bad for a beginner your OCG is a lil messed up but i don't really care about that.however i will give a fix to help you on your way ;) This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-type or Fiend-type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-type or Fiend-type monster from your Graveyard, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and inflict 200 Damage to your opponent times the level of the destroyed monster. If this effect is used, decrease the Level of this monster by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, remove this card from play. The effect is cool and its balanced, hell i may even play it so8.3563/10 Why have you uncapitalized 'Type'? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Ooops, its been awhile sense i'v worked on a card with a type effect in it and forgot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 You could reduce the 5 monster Tribute to just 3. As it has the stats of a weak LV6. Maybe limit the Zombie/Fiend limit to just one Type. The first part of the effect is good, but the last part looks wrong. This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-Type or Fiend-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-Type or Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard, you can destroy 1 monster and inflict damage your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200, this monster's Level is reduced by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, it is removed from play. Well tbh, I'm not sure on the wording of the reduce Level by 1, but that's what I remember from some Tuners. Thanks :) Well it sounds right to me. Not bad for a beginner your OCG is a lil messed up but i don't really care about that.however i will give a fix to help you on your way ;) This card cannot be Set or Normal Summoned. This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-type or Fiend-type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-type or Fiend-type monster from your Graveyard, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and inflict 200 Damage to your opponent times the level of the destroyed monster. If this effect is used, decrease the Level of this monster by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, remove this card from play. The effect is cool and its balanced, hell i may even play it so8.3563/10 Thanks for the fix, but i already took Liams advice, sry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 your talents in balancing a card and creativity are way above your level! the card itself is very usefull its the big cahuna in any zombie deck there isnt much more you can fix except the OCG maybe, really this is a great job 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 I like your creativity, and very well balanced. Solid 9/10 This would sound better, at least to me.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard, you may destroy 1 monster and inflict direct damage to your opponent's Lifepoints equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200. For every card destroyed by the effect of this monster this card's Level is reduced by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, it is removed from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 I like your creativity, and very well balanced. Solid 9/10 This would sound better, at least to me.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard, you may destroy 1 monster and inflict direct damage to your opponent's Lifepoints equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200. For every card destroyed by the effect of this monster this card's Level is reduced by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, it is removed from play. Set = Normal Summon may = can direct damage = anything to the opponent is direct Lifepoints = Life Points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Set = Normal Summon may = can direct damage = anything to the opponent is direct Lifepoints = Life Points Set is different from Normal Summon normal summon is when you summon from hand in face-up attack positionset is when you summon in face-down def positionflip summon is when you flip a card into face-up attack postion after it has been set.special summon is a summon than can be in atk position or defence, all depends on the situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 your talents in balancing a card and creativity are way above your level! the card itself is very usefull its the big cahuna in any zombie deck there isnt much more you can fix except the OCG maybe, really this is a great job 9.3/10 Thanks alot!! :) I'm glad you like it. Well i dress for success... or something like that lol. I like your creativity, and very well balanced. Solid 9/10 This would sound better, at least to me.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 Zombie-Type monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, by removing from play 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard, you may destroy 1 monster and inflict direct damage to your opponent's Lifepoints equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200. For every card destroyed by the effect of this monster this card's Level is reduced by 1. When this card reaches Level 1, it is removed from play. That does sound better to me too, but i'm afraid it's not correct ocg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Set is different from Normal Summon normal summon is when you summon from hand in face-up attack positionset is when you summon in face-down def positionflip summon is when you flip a card into face-up attack postion after it has been set.special summon is a summon than can be in atk position or defence, all depends on the situation. Don't correct me, I know what I'm talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Don't correct me, I know what I'm talking about. He sure does lol, especially knowing his a mod. New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moppmoppmopp Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Hey! Is that your first card? Much better than the most of my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Hey! Is that your first card? Much better than the most of my cards. Yes, yes it is lol. Well i guess i'll take that as a compliment :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 in your new card its halve* just saying, still love the cards =p any instead of destroy, try tribute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Don't correct me, I know what I'm talking about.http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Common_Summoning_Conditions all im saying that summoning and setting is different i know you know that but she should not take that away from the lore otherwise the card would be able to bypass its summoning conditions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 in your new card its halve* just saying, still love the cards =p any instead of destroy, try tribute Thanks :) Fixed the ocg. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Common_Summoning_Conditions all im saying that summoning and setting is different i know you know that but she should not take that away from the lore otherwise the card would be able to bypass its summoning conditions Thanks, but i'm good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Well im surprised that these cards were made by a new guy(Or girl, Im too lazy to look right now) Not Super Special Awsome but at least a 8/10- And a rep for the new....Person >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Well most newbs don't tend to look around first and learn from others or bother reading rules or tutorials and i'm one of those that does :) So that's why i'm pretty good, + i'm a girl thank you :) and thanks for the rep! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♣Master of the Dead♣ Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 4 New cards added. Comment, rate, suggest, add your own card, and +rep me please :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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