Lightning Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 These are based off of the Chocobo from the Final Fantasy series tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Both cards have nice pics but you should try using some backgrounds :DAbout your OCG (Official Card Grammar) - it's still quite amature-ish, but it should get better with time. Here is the correct OCG for your cards:Chocobo: When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Chocobo Knight" from your hand or Deck.Chocobo Knight: While "Chocobo" is face-up on the field, this card gains 500 ATK. The Type of the first card is fake. Try avoiding that. In this case Winged Beast should do just fine. ;)It's odd how the weaker one summons the stronger one. Oh, well, you chose it to be this way so I don't mind ^_^Not bad for first cards, but have a long long way to go :lol:Keep on working! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 hehe sorry did'nt know what type a chocobo would be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Fake types are perfectly fine in the Pop Culture subforum. I suggest you make both of them Winged-Beasts. Liking the cute pictures :3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 if only those had some background other than white... i would rate them 7/10 or so since Neos pointed out the OCG errorsbut it would be cool if they had some other unique effect :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 to krazyxgamer thanks and sorry they don't have more effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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